love comes softly...................Free love, is like a rainbow...it only lasts so long. True love only comes once in a while, it does not come fast, nor freely. When men and woman around the age of sixteen, before the have met love, and understand it. Those children have not recognized that when you engage in love, you meet trouble. Young folk seems to think that love lasts forever, they have yet to learn the meaning of the word. However, They are correct if they seem to think forever is not very long. They are absolutely wrong if they do not just say forever, but actuwally meen it!............sorry, i didn't finish it
2006-08-14 08:27:36 · 6 answers · asked by Anonymous in Games & Recreation ➔ Hobbies & Crafts
You should finish this,it comes from inside and thats good,I write poetry ,i like it very much ....
2006-08-14 09:12:12 · answer #1 · answered by whitewitchnite 3 · 0⤊ 1⤋
In honesty I think you've made it too long each break and it seems more like a short story of someone's love life than a poem. But it's quite good because it's original and it's one of a kind. :] You'll be awesome at poetry if you keep it in mind.
2006-08-14 08:35:18 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
The beautiful Sandwich, Sandwich good as this! Sandwich and the ways in which you can always me. When eating Alsendwichat hundred suddenly found all these, and all those who eat lunch and dinner there.
2006-08-14 10:22:11 · answer #3 · answered by Not Dave 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
i write about 1 poem a year......i'd have to say the wasn't good - sorry
2006-08-14 08:35:21 · answer #4 · answered by sa-da-tay 4 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Nope, stay with your day job, or get lessons
on poerty
2006-08-14 08:33:09 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
a poem is what you want to say. Sounds done to me! and i think it is great.
2006-08-14 08:50:34 · answer #6 · answered by moveplease 6 · 0⤊ 1⤋