five lonely years have passed without you by myside i struggle on the best i can but feel like i have died you raised me but the day u left me my whole world fell apart my life goes on without you and nothing is the same i have to hide my heartache when someone speaks your name you did so many things for me your heart was kind and true and when i needed you i could always count on you they say that time heals everything but i know it isnt so because it hurts as much today as it did five years ago among the loss and heartache one thought has made me glad you chose me to share with you the precious moments we had if tears could build a stairway and memories a lane id run right to heaven to be with u again love u mom kisses 4 ever
2006-08-13 00:29:19 · 10 answers · asked by Anonymous in Family & Relationships ➔ Singles & Dating
Your poem is very touching and conveys your thoughts and
feelings. Your Mom would be so proud of you.
I lost my Mom too several years ago. I know it takes a lot of time
to dull the hurt but you will be able to live a good & happy life. That is certainly what your Mom wants for you.
2006-08-13 00:36:59 · answer #1 · answered by Bethany 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I think that your mother would of been so proud of you, a poem that comes straight from the heart means it is good enough.
2006-08-13 00:37:06 · answer #2 · answered by jen180568 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
That poem is beautiful. It's not the cheap doggerel you see getting passed off as poetry these days, it's actually a very nice poem.
I can feel your sadness when I read it, it's heartbreaking.
2006-08-13 00:33:33 · answer #3 · answered by Z, unnecessary letter 5 · 0⤊ 1⤋
i am so sorry i keep u and ur mom in prey god will watch over her
if u want to email m e that is fine ok brittanycmptn@yahoo.com
i like the poem
2006-08-13 02:39:13 · answer #4 · answered by Brittany C 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
The poem is beautiful. I'm sure she would love it.
2006-08-13 00:36:11 · answer #5 · answered by latingirl0527 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I am sorry for your loss, it is a very beatiful poem
2006-08-13 00:32:45 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
It's straight from your heart and it's very well written.
It's beautiful
2006-08-13 01:34:15 · answer #7 · answered by DNE 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Oh my that was like oh my i don't even know thta was just great i loved it...i'm sure she would luv it too. that was really beautiful.♥
2006-08-15 18:51:40 · answer #8 · answered by I Luv Joel Madden!! 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
yes very sweet i am sorry for your loss
2006-08-13 00:37:46 · answer #9 · answered by rebecca b 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
sniff........i think im gonna cry........
2006-08-13 10:02:40 · answer #10 · answered by gurcharand 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋