Within my life,I look to be.
What the world,expected of me.
The things I've done,The way I lived.
How I have grown,since being a kid.
But what I know now,compared to what I knew then.
Find good people,hold onto good friends.
The life I lived,changed so much.
I cherrish my soul,and hold onto Gods touch.
My life has changed,now heaven awaits.
I am a new man,I'm finally awake!!!
How many people have been there.
2006-08-12 17:39:08 · 9 answers · asked by lovely soul with insite 3 in Family & Relationships ➔ Singles & Dating
Hey Friend with Lovely Soul.....Such Beautiful Poem!!
Why do I always feel like I should come here, click on your profile, and answer your questions??.....lol
2006-08-13 11:40:02 · answer #1 · answered by AAP0305 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
its alright but the good friends part well its not so. IN my experince i think you have to live to learn and you will find out that thier is no friend you should hold on too cuz all of them will stab you in the back. not in a mean way but they will in one form or another. If you have no money and no place to live try to find a friend that is goiing to help you get on your feet if your life goes wrong for a year im not saying it will but it does happen im serious. The only thing you need to hold on is your family and even that will somtimes turn you away.
2006-08-13 00:48:17 · answer #2 · answered by the_cheap_rolex 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Very nice poem with lots of feeling.
2006-08-13 01:40:28 · answer #3 · answered by toughguy2 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
You need punctuation and spell checker, otherwise good
2006-08-13 00:42:50 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Good poem. I liked it :)
2006-08-13 00:42:57 · answer #5 · answered by a_cute_girl 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
you did good .how old r u?.keep it up mybe you'll get payed for one some day
2006-08-13 00:44:29 · answer #6 · answered by cassey c 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
POEM RATES A 9.5
2006-08-13 00:43:29 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
nice poem, what inspired ya??
2006-08-13 00:46:01 · answer #8 · answered by aimeebaby85 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Go to www.lovepoetry.com and submit it for real answers.....
2006-08-13 00:47:22 · answer #9 · answered by semper_fidelus07 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋