sweetly lying on a pillow
the feather
sings
row row row
your boat
PADDLE PADDLE
I tell you,
PADDLE
the feather is drowning
sinking to
the end of dolphin world
DOWN, DOWN
it goes and flows
and the toaster says to it
watch my commercial
Toasters ROCK
as it sinks to
the ground
2006-08-11 06:17:02 · 7 answers · asked by Anonymous in Education & Reference ➔ Other - Education
sorry, but to be truthful, don't give up your day job, you'll need it.
2006-08-11 06:31:31 · answer #1 · answered by snookieoo3 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
What do you think of it ? That's the real question. Poetry is an intensely personal thing. I like your usage of capitalization on the repeating words. Also, I can't really follow any particular theme. I've got pillows, feathers, dolphins, and toasters...
...creative. That's what I think of the poem.
2006-08-11 06:28:24 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
whoa buddy. that was amzing man . purely amazing . wow, that changes me. i have a whole new perserpcetive of my pillow. really. and ur right, toaster do rule. we should like write songs together for something. rock on man! that was inspiring, bravo bravo
2006-08-11 06:20:14 · answer #3 · answered by me 3 · 1⤊ 0⤋
thats great i have a poem too may be we should team up?
2006-08-11 06:42:32 · answer #4 · answered by nYc g@L 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
boring
2006-08-11 06:21:54 · answer #5 · answered by summerglow 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
it's cool.
2006-08-11 06:23:14 · answer #6 · answered by Passionate 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
HaHa... ok....
2006-08-11 06:25:54 · answer #7 · answered by RockergurlSoS! 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋