i got this poem from some place on the net..........its cool
I was sort of hoping,
That you would come along,
Like the answer to a prayer,
And the music to a song.
Like the kind of thing that happens,
At a special place and time,
That will change our lives forever,
Like a fantasy of mine.
The fantasy was there before,
I ever knew your name,
And now that I have found you,
We will never be the same.
So, pardon, if I look at you,
Forgive me if I stare,
At the fantasy I knew before,
I saw you standing there.
For I was always hoping,
That you would come along,
Like the answer to a prayer,
And the music to a song
2006-08-10 21:40:37
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answered by Judah 1
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When writing a poem for someone to enjoy, you should focus on the flow of the writing versus a set outline. Decide if you want your poem to ryhme or not. Don't compromise what you are saying in order to make a ryhme. This ends up sounding cheesy because the poem has to go off-topic.
Keep your poem relatively short if you don't know the person that well. He may lose interest if it is too long. Say what you have to say. Poetry doesn't have to feel "deep" to be pretty.
Good luck with your writings!!
2006-08-11 04:41:11
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answered by Anonymous
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I love the words you say, But yet I still do not know you.
You talk of honest things, but yet my heart feels its true.
I would really like to know you better, but yet it feels a little weird.
But yet i really do want to know you,deep past my fears.
I believe you could be my friend, maybe something more.
But yet I haven't met you, I still long to hear your voice.
So in this plea to know you better, these words come from my heart.
His name; writing this poem to you,Will be really our first start.
2006-08-11 04:43:32
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answered by lovely soul with insite 3
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hmm. well i love poems and im really good at it.
i can't help ya out if idk what hes all about
i haven't met him or talked to him.
but how i do it..
is i think of all the things about a guy that makes me happy
and makes me smile
throw in some humor
and somethin in common you two share.. to make him smile..
you can use this one i guess
if it works
I NEVER FROWN WHEN YOUR AROUND
ONLY CAUSE DISAPPOINTING YOU IS MY FEAR.
EVEN WHEN YOU HURT ME
I SMILE WHEN YOUR NEAR
YOUR SCENT IS SO PERFECT
IT EXPRESSES THE WAY YOU MAKE ME FEEL
ID LOVE TO SIT AND ADMIRE YOU
CAUSE YOU MAKE ME FEEL SO REAL
WHEN IM WITH YOU
IM MYSELF
ITS GOOD TO KNOW I CAN STILL BE FIVE
YOU MAKE MY HEART
SKIP ALL ITS BEATS BUT STILL
IVE NEVER FELT SO ALIVE
yeah you can change things
like the when im with you im myself crap
to when i talk to you bla bla blah
you can do it..
thats just to get you somewhere
goodluck
2006-08-11 04:39:27
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answered by Anonymous
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Dude
Dude on the other side of the screen who i havent not met
when you talk to me all nice and sweet you get me all wet
your words are like music to my ears
especially when you tell me you want to poke me in my rear
2006-08-11 04:37:53
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answered by Obsidian © 5
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Here's a little love poem to you,
trying to say that my feelings are true,
all things that are to be said,
can be abbreviated in one sentence: "come to bed".
2006-08-11 04:38:17
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answered by Anonymous
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Check out "How to write a love letter" in the link below...
2006-08-11 04:35:25
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answered by ~~~J~~~ 3
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www.lovepoetry.com,www.e-poems.org etc websites are available for COPY PASTE in terms of free source of poems availability...better still try to write ur own feelings down in the poem will take time but atleast will be ur own and individual!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
2006-08-11 04:38:36
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answered by freedomfriestwo 1
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