A call from God
Though you sleep,your lifes no more.
Your soul now knocks on heavens door.
You are so loved,you'll now be missed.
We now so long, your touch and kiss.
The life you lived,you lived it well.
Where you lay,you'll rest a spell.
Your bodies dead,your soul still lives.
You now reside, where our lord is.
This place you left, was once called life.
No more struggles,you won that fight.
You left this life,now I'm alone.
God called you up,and took you home.
Is this a good poem. What do you think?
2006-08-10 19:52:44 · 24 answers · asked by lovely soul with insite 3 in Family & Relationships ➔ Singles & Dating
Yes it's a good poem!! I hope you don't plan on going anywhere...lol
2006-08-10 21:06:44 · answer #1 · answered by AAP0305 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I think it's a very good . The best poems I ever read in my live.
2006-08-11 02:58:51 · answer #2 · answered by kitty 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Yes It is al loveley poem. You are a very good writer! Too bad I missed you today!
2006-08-11 14:57:03 · answer #3 · answered by Rachel M 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
yes, i think it's a nice poem. have you lost some special to you? if so i'm very sorry. you know to be absent frome the body, is to be present with Lord
2006-08-11 02:59:18 · answer #4 · answered by lynda g 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Sad poem , are you writing for someone died or you are planning to die soon or are you going to read that on the funeral. anyway I think another poem it is good.
2006-08-11 02:58:39 · answer #5 · answered by tangind 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
it's a good poem but not one to give to your girlfriend er something.
it's bout dying and your soul rising to heaven.
i lovee it.
2006-08-11 02:58:55 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
WOW! I love poems...I myself write poems...and this is a really great powerful poem...I really liked it...It's actually categorized as one of my favorites...I'm not really a religious person...but good job...keep it up...again WOW!!! he he he...so true as well...
2006-08-11 02:58:43 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
i think it is very beauitiful you are very talented keep up the good work and as always pass on gods word it what he wants us to do
2006-08-11 02:58:04 · answer #8 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
i think it is a very good poem. did you write it? email me if you want i would like to get to know you. maybe we can be friends. my email is lizzie122489@yahoo.com
2006-08-11 02:57:00 · answer #9 · answered by lizzie 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Touching. You did good.
2006-08-11 02:56:24 · answer #10 · answered by tonya86_chipmunk 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋