Worlds in worlds
Individuals with minds far from reach
Living and thinking of what to teach
Teaching the millions of mindless sheep
Flocking to evil with their hearts open wide
Nothing but darkness waits inside
A misplaced kingdom caught in time
The genuine things are lost in our mind
All our praised leaders concealed in masquerade
With question on what to adhere to
With question of what is accurate
our faux royalty
Prancing around in there riches
When there are mouths to feed
Poor country’s with nothing to lose
Holding to their souls amidst the abuse
When all these things are said and done
Our god is shaking his head
With the savior son
Hearts hurt scared and bruised
With nothing to gain and everything to lose
Somewhere deep inside we live
But till then we got nothing to give
2006-08-10 13:12:10 · 10 answers · asked by Anonymous in Society & Culture ➔ Religion & Spirituality
Not to bad. Could use shorter sentences in some spots to match the cadence but all in all its a good try.
2006-08-10 13:20:44 · answer #1 · answered by child_of_the_lion 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Very Nice (applauds)
2006-08-10 20:19:31 · answer #2 · answered by Angel B 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
really nice.
plenty of depth.
is it the US to which you refer?
just one thing I would change in the last line
but until then we have nothing to give
2006-08-10 20:29:24 · answer #3 · answered by elibw 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It is really good do. You write a lot of poetry.
2006-08-10 20:25:02 · answer #4 · answered by Pyro 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Very beautiful...people hardly think on their own these days.
2006-08-10 20:21:03 · answer #5 · answered by Gothic Martha™ 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Thats really good.
2006-08-10 20:22:26 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
eh not my cup of tea, but pretty talented.
2006-08-10 20:19:09 · answer #7 · answered by Ann_Tykreist 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I think this answer just got me to 2,500 points.
THANKS!
2006-08-10 20:17:27 · answer #8 · answered by QED 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I like it.
2006-08-10 20:20:51 · answer #9 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
pretty good!
2006-08-10 20:16:54 · answer #10 · answered by Sara 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋