This is what I need help with. He is really my step father but I have been with him since I was little and he has alway's treated me like his own. He is 63 years old with a bad heart. It's also his birthday and I want to write him a poem letting him know how much I love him!! And how much I apreciate how much he has done for me. So If anyone out there could help me write him a poem. Please help me!! I want him to have something from me that he can have forever. I just need some help!! Thanks
2006-08-10 05:43:38 · 6 answers · asked by Linda S 43 2 in Family & Relationships ➔ Family
Since you've been with your StepDad since you were little it's okay I would say to call him "Dad" and I'm sure he would really love it if you would. You did call him your father when you said he was in the hospital. That said, try this out:
Through the years your love has embraced me
You been my strength and so inspiring
You've made me laugh when I'd cry
You've kissed all my ouchies goodbye
I don't say this enough you see
But you do mean the world to me
Your my Father, my Dad, my Friend
My love for you will never end
2006-08-10 07:33:19 · answer #1 · answered by MzzandtheChuchuBees 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Well, I'm very good with poetry so here we go.....I hope you like it.
How can I sing my gratitude?
Explain my silent sea;
approximate in words the gift
that you have been to me?
Thank you dad so much
for all the love you've bestowed,
I shall always cherish and remember
All the care you have showed.
You have honestly been
the greatest dad for me,
you have treated me like royalty
and that is my final decree.
In my mind you are admired,
in my heart you are well-respected
you had come into my life,
unbelievably unexpected.
I think of you all day,
you are my dream come true
and every thought of good parenting,
I owe them all to you.
2006-08-10 06:03:56 · answer #2 · answered by lovely butterfly 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
I am not a poet, however...Make a list of everything you appreciate about him, then come up with other ways to say them that rhyme( a thesaurus will help)
2006-08-10 05:51:26 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
to my gentle father (his name),how i love you loads,to take me as a daughter and watch me grow and grow,been with me through tuff times,and when life is such a laugh to be my perfect father our bond will always last.i never want to loose you or ever see you cry and for now and all eternity im always by your side,
2006-08-10 08:53:30 · answer #4 · answered by sammydeea 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Just say what's in your heart and I'm sure it will be great
2006-08-10 09:18:05 · answer #5 · answered by latingirl0527 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
i dont know man good luck
2006-08-16 03:01:23 · answer #6 · answered by straight pimpin 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋