When you love someone so deep inside,
It seems like it’s so easy to hide,
You’ve loved him for so very long,
You would think he could do no wrong.
Every day you would hope and pray,
That he would always stay this way,
He treated you like you should be treated,
You thought your life was finally completed.
One night he was so sweet to you,
You thought all those thing were maybe untrue,
Two days later he was back the same,
You thought you were the one to blame.
You thought that you would marry him someday,
But this time god wanted to get his way,
You wanted things back how they were before,
But you know this couldn’t happen anymore.
It was Saturday night about ten o’clock,
You heard the news and it wasn’t a shock,
You knew this was going to happen soon,
As you laid there and cried in the pale lit moon.
Its night or day?
That’s moon or sun?
Well, any way,
I have to run,
I see the tears,
Don’t cry my eyes,
I feel my fears,
I have to go,
I know it now,
Let’s end this show,
Just tell me, how?
2006-08-09 07:41:44 · 7 answers · asked by Anonymous in Entertainment & Music ➔ Jokes & Riddles
great Poems. they are awesome. maybe you should become a writer and have these poems published. keep up the good job.
2006-08-09 07:46:49 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Really good poems. If these are yours; never, ever, give up on writing your feelings and thoughts down. They are beautiful.
Thank you for sharing them.
2006-08-09 16:21:03 · answer #2 · answered by jfmm 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Not bad at all very touching!
2006-08-09 08:11:55 · answer #3 · answered by ♥Amanda♥ 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Pretty good
2006-08-09 07:49:34 · answer #4 · answered by qn.harpy 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
They are cool. From where you got them?
2006-08-09 07:47:48 · answer #5 · answered by desi 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
those poems are very nice :-)
2006-08-09 07:57:29 · answer #6 · answered by supercutebubblegum12 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
DID U WRITE THEM YOURSELF?? THEY ARE VERY GOOD!!!!
2006-08-09 07:50:30 · answer #7 · answered by SUN FLOWER 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋