When I think of you!
When I think of you I remember the times where we had a lot of laughs, a lot of cries especially when a special person dies. We seem to remember the moments and the tears. We stayed up a whole lot of nights just tryin and tryin to understand why this had happened, why it happened and why to us. Why we made such a fuss? Those long and tiring nights were all we used to do was stay in the living room and stare and wonder. Just one word is all we thought about. Why? Why? And why? I didn’t even have a chance to say good bye or that I love you and I always will. I was watching you through that hospital window and all I could wonder is……..why? I felt so helpless and so scared. I didn’t know what to do or even what to say. Can you just help me out now can’t you just tell me the next time I’m going to see you oh gramp oh gramp I’m sittin here rite in front of your grave and wondering are you looking over me? Are ya? are ya? Because grandpa… ever since I received that dreadful phone call I rushed to my bed and cried till I had no more tears left in me.
I’m sittin here rememberin you and letting my tears take the best of me!!! What can I do to let you know that you will always be in my heart? That I ….I love you!
2006-08-06 23:26:16 · 6 answers · asked by colbie j 2 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Music
thx everyone it was rite from tthe heart and it did make me feel better pls give me suggestions on making it better thx
2006-08-07 02:50:19 · update #1
it is a very lovely song which i think is right from ur heart just sing it lol
2006-08-06 23:49:01 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Honestly, it is well, but it surely does not consider to catchy. And it is rough to inform with out track in view that the one individual that has the melody is you, in view that I guess you have been contemplating it even as penning this. That's what I do whilst I write my songs. So if it used to be ever published, I could purchase it. Just demands a little bit contact up. A little much less poetry to I used to be catching directly to that.
2016-08-28 11:31:01 · answer #2 · answered by ? 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Very sweet sentiments,a lil' long for verses though..and ya need a chorus reflecting the name of the song,just my thoughts!Good luck!
2006-08-06 23:40:29 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Now THAT is from the heart. I'll bet just writing that made you feel better!!!!
2006-08-06 23:31:24 · answer #4 · answered by gadjitfreek 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
it nice, but there hardly any arrangement..........no chorus....nothing...........but the song heartfelt, just work on arrangement
2006-08-06 23:32:35 · answer #5 · answered by syedibar 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
is really nice... but sad...
2006-08-06 23:32:47 · answer #6 · answered by Sky_girl_ dyana 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋