"Gone"
Selling out
Is not my thing
Walk away
I won't be broken again
I'm not
I'm not what you think
Dream away your life
Someone else's dream
Nothing equals nothing
Letting go
Is not my thing
Walk away
Won't let it happen again
I'm not
I'm not very smart
Why should I feel sad
For what I never had
Nothing equals nothing
Turn to stone
Lose my faith
I'll be gone
Before it happens
Selling out
Is not my thing
Walk away
I won't be broken again
I won't
I won't fall apart
Dream away your life
Dream away your dream
Nothing equals nothing
Turn to stone
Lose my faith
I'll be gone
Before it happens
Turn to stone
Lose my faith
I'll be
gone
2006-08-06 16:57:51 · 19 answers · asked by Anonymous in Arts & Humanities ➔ Other - Arts & Humanities
try again
2006-08-06 17:04:30 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
I feel that your really putting yourself down
To me it's saying that once you had a dream and thought you were someone and your dreams failed you instead of picking yourself up and starting over you Became a nobody or nothing. Well your poems say that you are losing your faith you might just be still trying fulfill your dream
2006-08-07 00:08:09 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Ahhhh...teen angst. I wrote a million of those 15 years ago. Save this somewhere, so that when you are an adult looking back, you will see how far you've come. I have a whole book that I read from time to time to remind me how care-free those teen years were now that I really do have problems (i.e. rent, bills, kids to feed & clothe).
2006-08-07 00:04:35 · answer #3 · answered by Ashley F 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I wrote hundreds of poems in my youth- even getting a few published (and not in those poetry contest things)
It was beautiful because it came from the very depths inside of you
However it felt jumbled and confused to me. I don't know maybe that's what you were going for.
It didn't flow for me-it jumped from thought to thought.
2006-08-07 00:02:19 · answer #4 · answered by heatherhedyjon 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I like it! I think whatever u r feeling inside should always be brought out in poem or song and it makes it that much more beautiful.. Thank u for sharing it with us.
2006-08-07 00:05:04 · answer #5 · answered by Mary W 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Sucks as a poem, would make mediocre lyrics for a manufactured pop act.
Rawlyn.
2006-08-07 00:04:06 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Wow, I really liked that. You shouldn't post your poetry on here if it is not copy written. People can plagiarize it and you can't do a thing about it without a copyright.
2006-08-07 00:05:37 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
i dont think its up to anyone to tell u what we think of a poem. a poem is something that is reflective of how ur feeling. its a creative way to express ur feelings plus let others enjoy it at the same time
2006-08-07 00:03:22 · answer #8 · answered by fuzzycakes 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I like it,itsKool 2 thumbs up
2006-08-07 00:13:52 · answer #9 · answered by who c 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Good job!! I write poems too!!! ^-^ don't listen to that burger king person, he/she just doesn't appreciate poetry and carls jr. is waaaaayy better, except I'm a vegetarian now.... so yeah. anyways!!!! Great Poem!!!
2006-08-07 00:04:39 · answer #10 · answered by principessa=o) 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Here's what I think: this would be better as a song. They sound like very good lyrics.
2006-08-07 00:00:41 · answer #11 · answered by kid_at_heart 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋