(i made up a story. tell me what you thnik. this is chapter 1)
"ATtention all students,we are having a dance here at the academy so make sure you have a date and DO NOT turn anybody down. Thank you" said the announcer. "Aw...this is bogus!" Kiba says."Bogus?" Shino asks. " Yeah! Its whiggity-whack!" Kiba says putting his headband on. "Whiggity-whack?"Shino thinks to himself.
In squad 7's room Sakura is thinking" I must ask Sasuke!" "I gotta ask Sakura!" Naruto thought."This is a ninja academy,dances will only slow me down!" Sasuke thinks.
Lee's squad is clam about it. TenTen is thinking" Lee...nah...Sasuke.....no......Choji.EW NO! Shikamaru..too depressing.N-neji.yeah! I could ask Neji.
Back in sqyad 8 Hinata is worried about asking Naruto." I should ask him...I hope nobody already has" she kept thinking. "Hey,Hinata ya know,you should really ask Naruto cause there is NO chance anybody has asked him" Kiba said brushing his teeth. "Worry about yourself Kiba....."Shino said. END
2006-08-06 08:04:22 · 7 answers · asked by Rikku 2 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Comics & Animation
cool yea hay right a letter 2 the prodecer and see if if he likes the idea u never know ohh one more thing if u get anymore i love 2 here about email me it at leo_1595@yahoo.com bye
2006-08-06 09:47:53 · answer #1 · answered by Leo 2 · 2⤊ 0⤋
a dance @ the academy?.......DONT GO THERE! hahahahah
dont turn it into an american thing! just dont. it sounds like its gonna turn romantic which naruto isnt really about. add ACTION and FIGHTING but pictures/drawings speak out more than a script. take out a paper and start sketching
2006-08-07 22:46:57 · answer #2 · answered by Mango 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Its cool I just hope Naruto and Hinata go to the dance together!!!
2006-08-07 18:29:07 · answer #3 · answered by yuyo 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
it's very good would have made a good episode back when they were still in the academy
2006-08-06 15:50:41 · answer #4 · answered by snow_da_man 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
heh. that's good. Just keep writing!
NARUTO FANFICT:D
2006-08-06 15:11:19 · answer #5 · answered by smilenbspecial 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
^.^ hehe that's real nice~ keep up with it!!
hope it really comes true
2006-08-06 15:23:52 · answer #6 · answered by Structure 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
That is very, very interesting. and hilarious.
2006-08-06 17:28:51 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋