fisherman hear my song, esotericism may annoy you too, forbidden knowledge is testimony to flatter who made you, like a woman's beckoning that hails from deeper than you think, devise not plans to entertain a fool with sacred drink
2006-08-06 06:32:56 · 10 answers · asked by Anonymous in Entertainment & Music ➔ Polls & Surveys
it reminds me a lot of occurences in the bible. maybe Jesus speaking to the fishermen, telling them that cults are even more annoying to Him than to them. the forbidden knowledge adam and eve gained was not a testimony to the One who made them but from the one that tricked them and to them it was if a woman was beckoning to them with kindness rather than evil. to be sure that the one you offer sacredness to, is the real One that created us , and be not fooled by the unholies.
2006-08-06 07:43:50 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
It's stupid and boring just like all other poetry.
Poetry takes absolutely no talent. There's nothing to judge it against - nothing to compare it to. It's just a bunch of random words, put together, trying to sound meaningful or deep.
2006-08-06 13:41:23 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Short but with a good vocabulary, I like the combination.
2006-08-06 13:37:35 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Pretty good, just put each verse in a different line because it confuses me a bit.
2006-08-06 13:36:29 · answer #4 · answered by ♫MizzUnderstood♫ 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
i cant fish without drinking & wife beckons me to not hassle her for a ride.
2006-08-06 13:40:42 · answer #5 · answered by enord 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
i love it! you should be a writer!
just one question?
what does esotericism mean?
2006-08-06 16:13:07 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Not Bad!
2006-08-06 13:37:28 · answer #7 · answered by True Blue 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
random.
i luv random!
but why do yu like poetry?
2006-08-06 13:41:51 · answer #8 · answered by crazyboutchocolate911 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
very good. i really don't understand it but it soundz great
2006-08-06 13:37:07 · answer #9 · answered by chica 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
really makes no sense. sorry
2006-08-06 13:38:14 · answer #10 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋