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Many days within my life,has helped inspire these words I write.
My feelings flow, my minds at ease, each word I write has set me free.
Some say their good, others say their insane, Some are really awesome, and some just plain.
But for everything they say, I always write each line, then I read each word someday, sometime.
all I can say, its not just for myself, each word is for you and everyone else..

What does that poem say to you. Ya I know come on with the critiques

2006-08-04 20:50:11 · 10 answers · asked by lovely soul with insite 3 in Family & Relationships Singles & Dating

10 answers

it says that the person who wrote that poem is really deep, that is a truly great poem. i have no criticism

2006-08-04 20:55:56 · answer #1 · answered by ezzaphill 3 · 1 0

Hmm..

To me it says that witten word is often provoked by real life and that the words we use to express our lifes journeys are very powerful not only to ourselves but to others as well.. So choose what you share carefully..

2006-08-04 20:56:22 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0 0

that each time u write a poem
it helps you to be a better person

2006-08-04 21:00:52 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0 0

It just sounds like you are enjoying righting this poem but I really can't understand what point you are trying to make.

2006-08-04 20:58:07 · answer #4 · answered by Sammy 4 · 0 0

could do with a bit of a spelling and grammar check but otherwise it's pretty cute. Generally I hate poetry - despite being a writer - but that was ok :)

2006-08-04 20:57:54 · answer #5 · answered by agliotti 3 · 0 0

i really like it, your poem shows a care free attitude, that nothin matter besides what you feel, and maybe someday someone will like it, and dat willbe the right person.

2006-08-04 21:02:02 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 0 0

A person who cares about life and what others think :)

2006-08-04 20:56:06 · answer #7 · answered by mickurahul 3 · 0 0

well it meant to say that people go though all kind of moods in life
and no matter what kind of mood your in this poem is for you,

2006-08-04 20:57:31 · answer #8 · answered by little ace 4 · 0 0

wherever i run ,i cant hide
whenever i'm sad, i remember everything
whoever with me, noone by my side
whatever i do, i won'y be happy
however i act, i won't be loved

2006-08-04 20:59:25 · answer #9 · answered by dina_sas80 3 · 0 0

im not sure but it does speak to me!!!it is really good!!!!

2006-08-04 21:03:23 · answer #10 · answered by Jackie 4 · 0 0

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