You should really show your passion for something! Be sure your essay is organized, well thought-out and strong. Better to have a short high-impact essay than a long weak one. I read a lot of college admissions essays, and the ones that stand out are the ones filled with passion, the ones that are focused, and the ones that are positive. Don't whine about something bad that has happened to you, because all of us have had terrible things happen at some point in our lives. Be creative and have fun with it!
2006-08-03 12:55:42
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answered by magerk 3
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I'm going to second the first response. Write about a topic or life event that has a significant impact on you. It's best to select a topic which reflects personal commitment and personal actions. Scholarships are rewards for past achievements, but also rooted in your potential for future achievements. Best of luck.
2006-08-03 16:39:00
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answered by Freddie 3
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So you love skating. Why not write an essay about how skating is a great preparation for life....Goal setting, practice, learning, competition, mentoring, success, failure, ...you get the idea.
It's always best to write about something you know about. If the skating idea doesn't work for you, find something else that you're really interested in and write about that.
Good luck!
2006-08-03 11:12:44
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answered by Bobbie 5
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It sounds to me like they're finding so you might chat approximately why you experience you deserve the economic help. they are not in it for a lesson on paintings, even a large artist like Escher. enable them to appreciate what paintings ability to you, how long you have dreamed of being an artist and what you desire to make a contribution to the paintings international. What getting the degree in paintings could mean to you and/or your loved ones for my area. i think of pointing out Escher is effective yet i does no longer flow into large element and that i truthfully does no longer upload a image of his artwork. every physique in the paintings community knows who MC Escher is and including an occasion of his artwork could insult the reader, making them experience such as you're speaking right down to them, insinuating that they are not familiar together with his artwork. besides that’s purely my suggestion, flow with what you experience tender with. I desire you oodles of success, hun!
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answered by albury 4
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Write about a life experience that you feel a strong feeling for. Like maybe a challenge that you had to overcome.
2006-08-03 11:08:53
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answered by Anonymous
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be honest. say why you think that you deserve this scholarship and talk about your life and things that have happened to you that made you the person you are today.
2006-08-03 11:18:44
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answered by bonita wheda 2
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i think you should talk about your life..what your goals are and why you need the money for the scholarship
2006-08-03 11:10:49
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answered by Anonymous
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anything
2006-08-03 11:09:17
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answered by Anonymous
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