What dp you think of this poem
I have been adopted. My mom I am writing this to is my biological Mom .I miss her and love her we both have been though a lot . I only have one joy before I die. I am a failure if she doesent find christ as I have.
My greatest Joy!!
My greatest joy before I die.
Is to see you dunked and baptised
No greater joy would come into my life,
except maby some children and my wife.
But you gave me life and taught me love.
Gave me the hope of something above
Know I go no more thiugh grief and pain
But have a lot more to possibly gain.
Deing without you in the kingdom above.
Is like leaving behind someone beloved.
When I get to heaven find me there
Nexts to the savoir
you will see me in tears.
I told you mom I did not lie.
Your right my son you will reply
I hope you except my words this time
No greater joy in this life.
Will come by you recieving christ.
2006-08-03 06:50:12 · 3 answers · asked by Don The great .................. 2 in Education & Reference ➔ Quotations
Wonderful expression of love...awful poem.
2006-08-03 17:14:37 · answer #1 · answered by keats27 4 · 3⤊ 1⤋
I think that's soo sweet! And it's a really good poem. I write poems myself and I've written 42 since Novemeber. But that's a good poem!!! Great job=]
2006-08-03 14:21:28 · answer #2 · answered by snappypappy797 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
great job..
good luck be with you..
2006-08-04 00:46:58 · answer #3 · answered by nats 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋