Beautiful dreamer, wake unto me,
Starlight and dewdrops are waiting for thee;
Sounds of the rude world heard in the day,
Lull'd by the moonlight have all pass'd a way!
Beautiful dreamer, queen of my song,
List while I woo thee with soft melody;
Gone are the cares of life's busy throng, --
Beautiful dreamer, awake unto me!
Beautiful dreamer, out on the sea
Mermaids are chaunting the wild lorelie;
Over the streamlet vapors are borne,
Waiting to fade at the bright coming morn.
Beautiful dreamer, beam on my heart,
E'en as the morn on the streamlet and sea;
Then will all clouds of sorrow depart, --
Beautiful dreamer, awake unto me!
2006-08-02 14:06:01 · 15 answers · asked by Anonymous in Entertainment & Music ➔ Jokes & Riddles
You stole this poem butt head look at my question!
http://answers.yahoo.com/question/index;_ylt=An95cOkwrAOrkkXsdnr2VmDsy6IX?qid=20060802184831AAjolpr
2006-08-02 14:51:05 · answer #1 · answered by MyStalkerLovesMe!Clickhere4proof 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I'm confused, this it what "baldeyes" just sent me:
Subject: Poem
Message: Michelle, you hurt my feeling telling me my poem was lame. Do you like this one though, i wrote it for a secret lover last summer.
Beautiful dreamer, wake unto me,
Starlight and dewdrops are waiting for thee;
Sounds of the rude world heard in the day,
Lull'd by the moonlight have all pass'd a way!
Beautiful dreamer, queen of my song,
List while I woo thee with soft melody;
Gone are the cares of life's busy throng, --
Beautiful dreamer, awake unto me!
Beautiful dreamer, out on the sea
Mermaids are chaunting the wild lorelie;
Over the streamlet vapors are borne,
Waiting to fade at the bright coming morn.
Beautiful dreamer, beam on my heart,
E'en as the morn on the streamlet and sea;
Then will all clouds of sorrow depart, --
Beautiful dreamer, awake unto me!
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Hope you like it. Names Jeffery by the way. Whats Yours.
2006-08-02 14:18:47 · answer #2 · answered by ♥michele♥ 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
That was REALLY good. You could have told me it was by some famous poet and I would've believed you!! That was wonderful, you should think about writing a book of poems and getting it published. Rate it? Hmmm, I would definately say a 9 out of 10. The only reason I don't give it a ten is well, nothing is ever perfect! Though your poem was very close. And just so you know, it's nice to see a guy taking part in poetry, most girls I know find that very attractive.
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Whoa, hold up a sec. What was that Duc602
said? There's a real poem just like that?! So
you didn't think that all up on your own?! Jeez, where is your dignity? So it WAS done by some famous poet.
2006-08-02 14:14:05 · answer #3 · answered by x 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
These are the lyrics to a song written by Stephen Collins Foster. Wayne M.
2006-08-02 14:24:11 · answer #4 · answered by Wayne M 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Great Poem. Never read or even heard of anything as beautiful.
2006-08-02 14:09:01 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Its good,Keep on keep,I give it a 8-10 for originality.
2006-08-02 14:10:45 · answer #6 · answered by michael r 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
sweet poem! I give it a 10
2006-08-02 17:07:46 · answer #7 · answered by Zoe 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
sounds like the original
2006-08-02 14:11:27 · answer #8 · answered by duc602 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
you stole someone elses work saying you did it that is low
2006-08-02 14:56:08 · answer #9 · answered by recmcmdc 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
great poemi give it #1-or A+ ;)
2006-08-02 14:10:05 · answer #10 · answered by Jill A 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋