this poem
its called im me
im not goth
im not prep
im not geeky
im not weird
they think im weak
im really strong
theyve got it all wrong
cant wait till they see
i can make em pee
if i kick em in the knee
to all those people just let me be!
i dont care
hey! life isnt fair
did someone tell them that before
but yet everyday they hear stupid hoar
outside im fearless
inside my heart is soar
theres something people gotta know
so they cant stop acting so low
im me
2006-08-02 13:14:43 · 7 answers · asked by Anonymous in Arts & Humanities ➔ Performing Arts
I think its a good expression of how you feel. I think you are very creative also. I will be honest, but remember it is my opinion. Nothing more. You should read more poetry and write more as well if you intend to make it your life's occupation. If you are doing just because you enjoy it however, then I say great work!
2006-08-02 13:23:35 · answer #1 · answered by sir_john_65 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I think you have some talent. Change the line "I can make em pee," though. I'm not sure you have spelled "hoar" and "soar" correctly, assuming you mean what I think you do.
2006-08-02 20:20:35 · answer #2 · answered by jdm003 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Nice work
2006-08-02 20:18:51 · answer #3 · answered by Rockvillerich 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Well I like it!! it sounds very nice.
2006-08-02 20:19:20 · answer #4 · answered by pret.tprincess4me 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Sorry, Don't quit your day job!!
2006-08-02 20:25:30 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
i think its funny and wierd
2006-08-02 21:12:26 · answer #6 · answered by rzjarvis 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
yeah!!!
2006-08-02 23:18:04 · answer #7 · answered by just2wild4ya 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋