2006-08-02 11:39:36 · 11 answers · asked by Don The great .................. 2 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Jokes & Riddles
What is love
No greater man than to give his life
And for what a simple sacrifice
Love is pure a sweet and true.
Will conque all thru and thru
Love to me is simply said
last beyond the grave, and when were dead.
Someday the world will awake and arise
and will gaze into our savoirs eyes.
No more thru stress and grief and pain.
So we can love and pass the grave.
all cause of god and his simple gift.
Ill love Ill love as pure as it is.
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Donald Quinn DonTheGreat.................
2006-08-02 11:41:23 · update #1
that is a very good poem i love the way u use ur words keep writing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
2006-08-02 11:56:14 · answer #1 · answered by bunny 2 · 3⤊ 0⤋
That Was A Truly Inspiring Poem. I Loved it.
2006-08-02 18:45:50 · answer #2 · answered by Cas 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Excellent!
2006-08-02 19:37:47 · answer #3 · answered by Steven P 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
yay~
somebody help me
somebody help me.
there are no replies
she yells once more"help me please!"
she sees people pass by
she wonders for fourteen days
drinking dirty water all day
she thought her life was gonna end
she lays and thinks about her wonderful life all day
she thinks about christmas and thanks giving
she wonders the thanks she gave
"lord thank you for my day and the wonderful day i lived "
lived...and she opend her dark eyes and wondered
im no longer in a black hole she wondered why she was in a ditch not one helping her
and she knows why it was her all along
she only thought of the horro and terrified situations she no longer saw darkness and saw the bright beaminh light
life isnt all that dad unless your all mad
think life as the other way
bad things will turn away
there are not doubt.
somtimes life needs salt and sugar but we can
afford it anyone can life comes from the person above
and flavor comes from the deep heart
negative comes sad sad comes the deep hole
think postive and good things will twinck.
2006-08-02 18:54:08 · answer #4 · answered by Grack 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
yes that's the best poem i heard keep going your doing great i write poems myself.
2006-08-02 19:36:40 · answer #5 · answered by Twix 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
This poem says something to me. "Why did I not read this before?" This is great!!!
2006-08-02 18:50:34 · answer #6 · answered by Nobody 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
yes
2006-08-02 18:42:41 · answer #7 · answered by brittanyandjeremy2006 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It's great!
2006-08-02 18:43:26 · answer #8 · answered by IthinkFramptonisstillahottie 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
wonderful(sniff)(sniff)just wonderful!
2006-08-02 18:44:52 · answer #9 · answered by nikki -nicole 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
oh my god are you newton? afghanian poet ???!!!
2006-08-02 18:47:50 · answer #10 · answered by shervin 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋