*Blind* (Continuted)
Soon my life was over and gone
I went to Hell, and it wasn't what I thought
Tears, thirst, separation is what it only brought
I looked back on my wasted rotten life
Not understanding why I didn't see this mercy
I wished I could've gone back and forgiveness would be my plea
It was too late for me in that horrid place
But not too late for you, Mercy is knockning at you door
Accept it and let you heart be free and soar
2006-08-02 04:40:00 · 7 answers · asked by OnFireForJesus! 3 in Society & Culture ➔ Religion & Spirituality
The poem is actually pretty good, quite an imaginative one. Good, not bad, not bad.
2006-08-02 04:43:20 · answer #1 · answered by andy14darock 5 · 0⤊ 1⤋
lmao that is amazing
amazingly horrendous, you need to lay off the drugs, they've destroyed your ability for rational thought
2006-08-02 11:43:44 · answer #2 · answered by chad l 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
that was good keeps the poems coming
2006-08-02 11:58:08 · answer #3 · answered by Ronizzy 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
That's very sweet. I'm sure your teacher will be very pleased.
2006-08-02 11:45:05 · answer #4 · answered by Allison L 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It is good. You should however try something more positive
2006-08-02 11:49:55 · answer #5 · answered by Kizzle 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
no such thing as hell
2006-08-02 11:43:32 · answer #6 · answered by sick of it all 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Great Poem... :-)
2006-08-02 11:46:54 · answer #7 · answered by aaliyahh1213 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋