I fall before the savior singing, worthy is the lamb
He stretches out his nail-scarred hands to take me as I am
In my robe of snowy-white, no stain has caught his eyes
He points unto the mercy seat and says, "my child, arise"
I stand before the father during which my knees collapse
Then angels wings, they carry me to my Father's lap
Oh Father you've been faithful and, you know that I have not
"This once was true but, now you're new because your life was bought
Without delay nor, is too soon when, Heaven's gates reveal
More splendor,grace and majesty than all the Earth's appeal
Architecture built by God,colors never seen
Streets of Gold,new songs are told in a world I could not dream
Angelic choirs never cease for praising is their pleasure
The Earth could not agree on peace but, I have found my treasure
All mysteries are now revealed and time does not exist
When in this moment, I am healed, dead fears cannot enlist.
There are 5 more paragraphs but no more room.
2006-08-01 21:57:45 · 29 answers · asked by BONNIE 2 in Society & Culture ➔ Religion & Spirituality
Well I'm not really a religious person, but I must say it's better than a lot of other poems people have asked me to read.
This one actually seems like it was well thought out, with plenty of care put not only into the content, but also into both the rhyme scheme and meter.
It's pretty well structured poem, and I'm sure plenty of people will be able to appreciate it, christian or not. Well done =)
2006-08-01 22:03:59 · answer #1 · answered by Steven B 6 · 1⤊ 1⤋
You have a true talent for written words. Much thought and meaning behind your verse. Also easy to understand the thought behind the words without heavy insight. Great work, keep writing so others can enjoy the fruits of your labor......would appreciate the rest as well....
2006-08-01 22:10:08 · answer #2 · answered by ? 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It is a extremely beautiful poem. To be the paragraph above have already communicated the message intended and any more would spoil the mervellous statement it display. There is such a display of faith.
2006-08-01 22:07:12 · answer #3 · answered by ngina 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Muy Hermoso
2006-08-01 22:07:13 · answer #4 · answered by Royal Racer Hell=Grave © 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Mornin Sis, I wish you slept and woke good. I leave out overdue nights plenty. When I fall comatose to sleep I upward thrust to sock heaven wherein the Blue, the black, the white ones preserve vigil over my night time time desires cavorting they play, as though free of their pals even as no longer having to listen to my laundry screams.
2016-08-28 14:04:44 · answer #5 · answered by bollinger 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It is insightful and I am sure some people will like it.
You are quite a talented writer
Good luck with your writings
2006-08-01 22:03:22 · answer #6 · answered by witchfromoz2003 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
That's what I call Divine Inspiration. How the Bible was written by divinely inspired earthly writers. God bless you!
2006-08-01 22:08:15 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
cool kitty continue u b come a preacher of christianity one day keep on having ur faith and use ur talent god has given its heart melting lines tat i have ever read
2006-08-01 22:03:11 · answer #8 · answered by aryanz_010 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It's nice.
Though I would suggest moving away from the AABB rhyming scheme.
2006-08-01 22:02:17 · answer #9 · answered by koresh419 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Hey thats a good poem.
2006-08-01 22:01:50 · answer #10 · answered by jdhmusic3029 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋