because i love you .....
because i love you
i travel every evening through the stars to your eyes...
to slumber as a kid, while you hold me between your arms...
and to sail with my longing ship to your ocean eyes...
because i love you ....
i can see the clouds while it draw your face..
and hear the sea croon with your name ..
while our hearts dance on that tune...
and because of you , i can see the world not like others..
because i love you ...
my heart refuse, on another chest to kill itself..
because your love , as a fire between my ribs..
river run in my body...
wind storm in my poetries...
sound from another language , never heard before..
because i love you ....
i choose your chest , to lay to rest..
search through the night about eyes contain my dreams..
and about stars like your bright...
because i love ..
because of your eyes..
i believe now in love...
believe in the passion..
believe in the fate , which god gave to me ..
in any time and any where..
and because i love you ..
i promised myself that never to cheat these eyes..
and that great heart..
so,,,,
do you believe me ..???
by: hazem02@yahoo.com
By hazem02
http://www.thestarlitecafe.com/poems/101/poem_8351645.html
please read more poems for my by visit my site , and leave me there your comments..
yours
hazem
2006-08-01 20:27:52 · 10 answers · asked by Anonymous in Family & Relationships ➔ Singles & Dating
sure the only part i like is "i love you" but it would be cute to give to a girl! and you know i love u! jk...lol. :)
2006-08-01 20:43:16 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 4⤊ 1⤋
this poem opens a secret door to your heart and shows that someone special just how romantic you can be I say keep up the good work but just try to keep them a bit shorter so as not to loose the readers interest.Otherwise it is a geat effort.
2006-08-02 03:40:57 · answer #2 · answered by flying_eagle_72 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
it way to over the top. you kind of feel like one of those stalker kind of ppl. that is the vibe im getting. tone it down a little and ill believe you.
2006-08-02 03:42:34 · answer #3 · answered by swimgurl805 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
No. I don't believe you. It feels somehow insincere. Over the top...
2006-08-02 03:35:00 · answer #4 · answered by OraclewannaB 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
No, swear...just kidding. Really I dont.
2006-08-02 03:32:12 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
yeah!u know why??
because i love u too
hahahaha(kidding)
2006-08-02 03:36:53 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Man what the....?That it just over kill and to get girls chat with you.
2006-08-02 03:50:12 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
honestly i didnt read past i love you...cause i didnt believe that even, so....sorry!!
2006-08-02 03:33:58 · answer #8 · answered by *Missing My Baby* 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
i believe you..
2006-08-02 03:31:16 · answer #9 · answered by yogesh 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
WHAT THE HELL IS WRONG WITH YOU!!!!!!
2006-08-02 03:30:41 · answer #10 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋