True Love..............
What can be better , than sharing a tender kiss
A warm embrace , on a magical night of bliss
A gentle caress , as my fingers stroke her face
As i utter her name , with each breath that i take
My heart skips a beat, when i look into her eyes
The thought of her takes me away, from this world of lies
From my waking moment ,her face is all that i see
Her beauty is unmatched , it's heavenly to me
I hold her hand ,and my whole life is like a dream
My passion for her flows through me, like a mighty stream
I watch her from a distance, she's poetry in motion
The love i have for her is deeper, than the deepest ocean
When she is not near me, my eyes fill with tears
But when she's by my side, my fears disappear
With excitement, I hang on every word that she speaks
I am breathless in her presence,my knees become weak
I would do anything for her, my life is in her hands
All she needs to do is ask me, and i'll do what i can
Love is a such a thing, which whisks you away
An amazing adventure for two, till your dying day
So hold on to the one you love , where ever you may be
For the love of another , can set your soul free
2006-08-01 19:13:03 · 16 answers · asked by SF2MJ 2 in Family & Relationships ➔ Singles & Dating
Two Thumbs Up. (sounds like someone might get laid tonight lol)
2006-08-01 19:17:41 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Beautiful! It sounds like you are in love, because you got all the signs right! :) It really is a wonderful feeling isn't it? I know exactly how you feel!
By the way...don't be surprised if the girl you read that to literally melts in your arms! :) It also might be the start of a very good night ;)
I do hope you continue to write and show us your poems! You're an excellent poet!
2006-08-01 19:18:12 · answer #2 · answered by littlerandiheather 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It is beautiful and I hope that this has been from a current wonderful experience! You should share it with the one you wrote it for! Keep writing. You have a light gleaming in between each word you type; refreshing.
2006-08-01 19:22:00 · answer #3 · answered by Sequoia 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Nice poem. When will you give it to her? The first moments of love are such moments of inspiration. Live this feeling...
2006-08-01 19:19:26 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
it is an amazing poem, and it really sounds like u reallly love this lucky girl! i rite poems like this, too, but i have to say, this beats all of mine! wutever that person hoo sed it wuzn't good is really stupid!! that is a wonderful poem and hooever u r sharing it with it is going to love it, no doubts!! it was beautiful, and any girl would b lucky to have u!!
2006-08-01 19:32:42 · answer #5 · answered by sweety_pie!! <3 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
if you want a one word answer..i'll say "AWESOME"
i wish somebdy writes such a lovely poem for me too.
2006-08-01 19:18:15 · answer #6 · answered by ROCKSTAR 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Mr. Chivalry says, "You're bringing it back! Chivalry is still here!!!"
Mr. Chivalry has spoken.
2006-08-02 07:49:30 · answer #7 · answered by L Jeezy 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
it's love only in a poem.it's a beautiful poem.u should be a poet.
2006-08-01 19:30:38 · answer #8 · answered by tropicalsunset245 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Perfect !
2006-08-01 19:17:59 · answer #9 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
hey its cool but where you in a summer class in utpa?
2006-08-01 19:17:46 · answer #10 · answered by Ck_TonyAVA 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋