Hello I will rake your front and back yard For $25 and willl get the Job done the same day. I will Rake and bag the leaves but will not take the bag after im done. I will finish depending on how many tress are on the yard.
2006-08-01 16:03:22 · 5 answers · asked by The_Dude 1 in Family & Relationships ➔ Family
very amateurish; grammar errors ... sounds like a 10 year old. $25 sounds like a lot... especially to some old lady with a small yard. Try something like this:
Your yard raked, front and back! Same day service! Call for quote.
Keep it simple.
2006-08-01 16:09:56 · answer #1 · answered by brunchbuddy 3 · 1⤊ 1⤋
You will rake and bag the leaves but not take them off the lawn and dispose of them yourself? I wouldnt hire you. Disposing of the bags is part of raking leaves. I mean, its just part of the job of yard work. The lawn mower guys that tidy up my apartment complex have to cut down bushes and stuff and they have to clean up after themselfs too by taking the bags.
2006-08-01 23:07:21 · answer #2 · answered by ziggunerin 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I think that you should have a simpler ad, something like
Will rake leaves in your entire yard and bag them for you for $25. Call ***-**** for more details.
Keep it short and to the point.
2006-08-01 23:10:45 · answer #3 · answered by ♥dream_angel♥ 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
XXXXXXXXXX for $25 I'd do it myself unless I had half and acre. Thank goodness I live in military housing and have a gardner who does it for free. XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX
2006-08-01 23:07:59 · answer #4 · answered by asoldierswife 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
that is like selling lemonade on a winter day
(it is summer are you a retard?)
2006-08-01 23:16:58 · answer #5 · answered by so_cute_one<> 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋