ok i am thinking of giving this poem to someone do u think it's good or bad.
I thought love was just a mirage of the mind,
it's an illusion a fake, impossible to find.
But the day I met you, I began to see,
that love is real, and exists in me.
2006-08-01 05:11:54 · 10 answers · asked by chaopred 3 in Family & Relationships ➔ Singles & Dating
. . . it's okay I suppose as long as you don't plan on giving it to me, 'cos I've got a weak stomach . . .
2006-08-02 13:26:51 · answer #1 · answered by Astra 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It's ok. It's very "me" oriented though, and as you know, real love (and less infatuation) has more to do about how it moves you to act to others, not really emphasis on what YOU get out of it or what it does for you.
If it were me, I'd add another line that has more to do with her... a wonderful start though.
2006-08-01 12:19:07 · answer #2 · answered by UnrealJuju 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Its great! But don't give it to the person unless you mean it. It can be pain full to hear words of love that aren't meant.
2006-08-01 12:18:35 · answer #3 · answered by squeak 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I love it. She will like it also because it came ffrom your heart. Women love a man that can express himself.
2006-08-01 12:17:06 · answer #4 · answered by princess 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
That's great!
2006-08-01 12:16:45 · answer #5 · answered by shae 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
love it
2006-08-01 12:14:55 · answer #6 · answered by SHE HATE ME 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I think it's good.
2006-08-01 12:16:06 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
wouldn't rock my world but go for it.
2006-08-01 12:17:00 · answer #8 · answered by bugdifino 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
THATS GREAT
2006-08-01 12:17:24 · answer #9 · answered by cheerbabe 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
hmmmm ... ur inlove @ )( @
2006-08-01 12:17:29 · answer #10 · answered by SAUCY 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋