My Breath . . .
I cant see without you, because my eyes are you,
I cant think without you, because my mind is you,
I cant breath without you, because my breath is you,
I cant live without you, simply because you are MY BREATH . . .
If y♥u have such nice text...........den pls post them
2006-07-31 02:51:08 · 7 answers · asked by Anonymous in Family & Relationships ➔ Singles & Dating
How is this??????????
2006-07-31 02:57:35 · update #1
SOMETIMES I NEED YOU…
SOMETIMES I NEED YOU:
TO BE THE RAIN TO THE FLOWER… TO GIVE ME THE ENERGY AND PURE GOODNESS THAT I NEED.
SOMETIMES I NEED YOU:
TO BE THE CLOWN TO THE SADEST PERSON …TO GIVE ME JOY AND HAPPINESS THROUGHOUT OUR TIME TOGETHER IN GOOD AND BAD.
SOMETIMES I NEED YOU:
TO BE SOUND OF THE WIND TO THE WATERFALL…TO LISTEN AS MY TEARS FALL AND TO HEAR THE WHISPER OF YOUR VOICE REASSURING ME IT’LL BE OKAY.
SOMETIMES I NEED YOU:
TO BE THE COMPASS TO THE VOYAGER…TO HELP ME KEEP ON THE RIGHT PATH, AND NOT LOOSE MY WAY.
SOMETIMES I NEED YOU:
TO BE THE ANCOR TO THE SHIP…TO KNOW WHEN IT’S TIME TO STOP WHEN THE SEAS GET TOO ROUGH.
SOMETIMES I NEED YOU:
TO BE DICTIONARY TO THE CONFUSED…TO BE HONEST AND PRECISE WITH ALL YOU SAY.
SOMETIMES I NEED YOU:
TO BE THE DOOR TO THOSE WHO NEED OPPERTUNITY…TO BE OPEN AND FORTHCOMING WTH ALL THAT IS YOU, AND NOT BE AFRAID OF LETTING SOMEONE IN.
SOMETIMES I NEED YOU:
TO BE THE SHELTER TO THE FRIGHTENED….TO BE SOMEONE WHO CREATES NO WORRIES WHEN YOUR AROUND, AND CAN BE COUNTED ON ALWAYS.
SOMETIMES I NEED YOU:
TO BE NOTHING BUT YOU TO ME….THE WONDERFUL PERSON THAT YOU ARE WHO MAKES ME SMILE EVERYDAY, AND WARMS MY HEART EVERY NIGHT.
2006-07-31 02:58:15 · answer #1 · answered by ** 2 · 4⤊ 1⤋
The title is a good lead in for a SCOPE advertisement.
Change the title.
the third line , third word is breathe,
don't use contractions in a poem ( use I cannot)
And, don't quit your day job.
2006-07-31 10:03:10 · answer #2 · answered by Angela 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
oxygen is indespensible for life n u r my oxygen widout you i be so incomplete...i live for you...i will never know love with any1 else....i was born to make you happy ....m all about loving... do you have sum1 in your life who wuld come up 1 day and ask what is more important me or your life ull say my life he/she wud b annoyed wid u.........den say u r my LIFE
2006-07-31 10:03:06 · answer #3 · answered by julie 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I couldn't read it, because my mind and eyes are you...
and you are illiterate.
that sh*t was a watse of time
loser
2006-07-31 09:59:59 · answer #4 · answered by RomanGOD 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
i like it good job
2006-07-31 10:04:08 · answer #5 · answered by ♥*♥Bahamian Gal♥*♥ 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
The "you" must be "everything"
2006-07-31 09:59:12 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
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2006-07-31 09:55:07 · answer #7 · answered by Fowl Language 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋