dear little baby boy
just four days ago your first birthday had past
and i still can't believe how the year had went so fast
i remember when i first held you and looked into your eyes
i new then that i could have cryed
because you looked so beauitful from head to toe
and from that day on i vowed i could never let you go
the months they flew by quickly and than you said dad
and even though i was happy it kind of made me sad
when you started crawling i couldnt help but smile with glee
because i was just so happy that you belong to me
and when you took your first steps i smiled even more
you took your first three steps and than fell softly on the floor
i hope when you grow you know how much i care
and that always in your life i will be there..
if you need a helping hand just call out my name
no matter what it is i will love you just the same
BE HONEST PLEASE I CAN TAKE THE TRUTH THANKS
2006-07-28 18:46:37 · 26 answers · asked by Melinda D 3 in Family & Relationships ➔ Family
This poem will always be cherished by your little one, even after he has his own little ones. I sure do like it ,it`s very warm and caring. we need use more expressions of love for our children these days. Now just a little correction in the spelling, perhaps do a spell check and this will really help. May God bless you and your little one.
2006-07-28 19:10:43 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 4⤊ 2⤋
This poem is soo cute! Just remember to check your spelling and punctuation (line 4 should say Knew not new and cried not cryed.) And maybe the title should be more personal.
2006-07-28 18:52:59 · answer #2 · answered by Raz 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It is a sweet and sentimental poem; but please, before you inscribe it in his baby book, correct it for spelling and grammar; capitalize appropriately and watch verb tenses.
...just four days ago your birthday HAD PAST-
vs. four days ago your birthday passed ;
...I still can't believe how the year HAD WENT SO FAST-
try "the year went so fast"...and so forth and so on.
You KNEW, not new, that you could have cried, not cryed... correcting the English gives it more readability.
aren't' little boys so special and so sweet?
2006-07-28 18:58:47 · answer #3 · answered by cryllie 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Thats sweet that you wrote your son a poem. Its nice because you highlight the important stages he went through before he turned 1.
2006-07-28 19:04:02 · answer #4 · answered by Mizz Know It All 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
LOOK HAVE you started a scrap book? You should. PUT the poem in there nicely typed or hand written. DATE THE POEM.THEN snap a picture of baby. PUT pictures there too. HAVE pictures snapped of you in there also. IF something should ever happen to you .THE baby will see your poem. BLESS you its sweet. star
2006-07-28 18:52:54 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
I think you are A great parent and I loved the poem. I hope your kid will appreciate you alot in life as years go by.
2006-07-28 18:52:18 · answer #6 · answered by TIONNA J 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Beautiful!! What a wonderful man you are to write such a sweet poem for your son to always cherish...
2006-07-28 18:51:13 · answer #7 · answered by Ladeebug71 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
That was beautiful it brought tears to my eyes because thats exactly how feel about my 1 year old daughter. You should send to a publisher right now.......
2006-07-28 18:52:22 · answer #8 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
really nice. i hope ur boy appreciates this when he grows up and he reads it. maybe he could pass it on to his own children and maybe he could tell them that it's a legacy handed down from a very loving parent
2006-07-28 18:52:42 · answer #9 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
I write. I would say bravo. And be sure you have a copy of it in his baby book for the years ahead.
2006-07-28 19:11:34 · answer #10 · answered by clcalifornia 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋