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when the working day is done
and the battle's lost and won
who will be their to guide you home?

they say... love will concure all
but i say that it only causes heart break....
it only causes headeachs...,
it'll suck you up and spit you out
to a city of misry and sorrow
where you wait for tomoorow but it never comes....

i've loved and hated
been desacrated, suicidal, depressed and all of the above

but when i see her face
see hewr walk in with grace
i almost forget the pain i've felt....

so try and learn from me
be all you can be
and dont get caught in world of lies...

just take that damn chance
ask her to dance
it'll be wort it in the end

- dont be like me when you love someone dont let them go

2006-07-28 11:32:08 · 18 answers · asked by Anonymous in Family & Relationships Singles & Dating

18 answers

I Like it. i think everyone can relate to this. We have all been there at one time or another. If we haven't we will be.

2006-07-28 11:38:48 · answer #1 · answered by shelly 3 · 1 1

Its another sweet crimson afternoon, facing the thunder through tears so blue. Now ask yourself is it worth the pain you gain, cause I'm so tired of playin this game. I'm so tired of playin this game but take away my scarlet rain and i'll grow old and fade away. I've seen people coming and leaving. Try and steal my girl while i'm still breathing. Cause this aint the time to take me on but you aint gonna stop for anyone and thats life. Farewell its been nice!

2006-07-29 00:49:35 · answer #2 · answered by paulcartwheel 3 · 0 0

Love conquers all
Love cures all
It will break your heart and will rip it out.
In this world of hussle and lies,
For duck's sake as well as your own,
Will you ask her to dance, there must be a chance
Even though it might be just once.
Only those dont' fall, who don't fly high.

2006-07-28 12:42:27 · answer #3 · answered by shortnotsilly 3 · 0 0

i've got another confession to make, i'm your fool
everyone's got their chains to break, holding you
where you born to resist or be abused

i needed somewhere to hang my head, without your noose
you gave something that i didnt have, but had no use
i was too weak to give in, too strong to lose

my heart is under arrest again, but i'd break loose
my head is giving me life or death, but i cant choose
i swear i'll never give in, i refuse

has someone taken your faith, its real, the pain you feel
the life the love , you died to heal
the hope, that starts, the broken hearts
you trust, you must confess


is someone getting the best, the best, the best, the best of you

i've got another connfession my friend, i'm no fool
i'm getting tired of starting again, somewhere new
where you born to resist or be abused
i swear i'll never give in, i refuse

is someone getting the best, the best, the best, the best of you

2006-07-28 11:41:16 · answer #4 · answered by manfromupton 2 · 0 0

first your spelling is appalling!!! Second...to have loved and lost is better than not having been loved at all. Third/ If you fall in love hold tight because its a merrygoround and if you hang on then everything will be ok.

2006-07-28 11:38:53 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 0 0

I don't see how you lost her in the poem. This poem is so sentimental. I like it because it's not sappy and it tells of frustration.

2006-07-28 11:41:57 · answer #6 · answered by melomane 4 · 0 0

Thats a bit deep for me!

2006-07-28 11:36:10 · answer #7 · answered by Charlene 2 · 0 0

where did you pinch this from? Well done if you wrote it yourself it was very good show your a deep thinker

2006-07-28 11:43:28 · answer #8 · answered by ? 2 · 0 0

ok i did what you asked i looked and got a wee bit confused so now i am going

2006-07-28 13:21:33 · answer #9 · answered by jkm13 3 · 0 0

wow. thats really good. thnx 4 the advice too.

2006-07-28 11:38:59 · answer #10 · answered by Fallen Angel 3 · 0 0

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