In search of my love
Light will not grace my love
Only the morning dew
Visions of heaven a cloudless sky
Eternal peace for her
Bring her back in dreams
Earthbound covers shift
Always whispers in the night
Victory of darkness over me
Ethereal lover without shape
Regrets too many in the morning light
2006-07-28 06:15:56 · 35 answers · asked by ? 6 in Family & Relationships ➔ Singles & Dating
You wrote
Over and over again
Unchaining your heart
So why is your "poetry"
Unusable,
Cheap, and
Kid-like?
2006-07-28 06:18:03 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 2⤊ 1⤋
Wow. Speechless. Well, maybe not. Are you planning on killing this girl? Is she dead and buried? Seriously.
Light will not grace my love
Only the morning dew (because she's buried in your backyard?)
Visions of heaven a cloudless sky
Eternal peace for her (since you killed her?)
Bring her back in dreams (since she's dead and it's the only place you can see her?)
Earthbound covers shift (does this mean the grass in your yard splits open to reveal her corpse?)
Always whispers in the night (a little tell tale heart action going huh)
Victory of darkness over me
Ethereal lover without shape (her ghost?)
Regrets too many in the morning light (regretting the stench from her rotting corpse every morning you awaken?)
You are one sick puppy.
2006-07-28 06:31:32 · answer #2 · answered by jdscorrupted 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Another great poem !
At least your not driving all over town with the body in your trunk again,
Man, that was a tough one to explain to the cops. I still can't believe that you convinced them that a spray painted flat black Gremlin was a hurse ! Kudos again !
Thank goodness they never saw the duct tape.
2006-07-28 18:14:06 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
This is not fair, I just got the same exact poem from my husband the other night. could it be that you wrote it to him!! and all he is telling me : This came from the heart darling, I wrote it for you! No wonder she will love it, I loved it too!! I am sorry I can't hold back my tears no more,it is so touching..(sniff)
2006-07-28 18:30:41 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
If she says all you care about is sex, then you must love someone else and this poem is for them.....Try to connect with the one you actually wrote about in this poem as you sound quite lonely without them.........
2006-07-28 06:20:32 · answer #5 · answered by silhouette 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
You are brilliant, a pure genious of prose. A bright shining light cascades from your flowing pen onto the parchment beneath it......
I don't get it.
2006-07-28 09:06:14 · answer #6 · answered by Sue 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Should I be calling the cops and reporting a dead body right now or what?
I Love Beaver...nice dude.
2006-07-28 06:45:29 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
This is not acceptable. No where is there a mention of shrimping, beavers, zombies or polls. Sorry, but this poem, sucks.
2006-07-28 12:39:11 · answer #8 · answered by Gypsy 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It's poetic. It's not about sex. But that's doesn't mean you care about anything other than sex. It just means you are artistic or you can copy and paste well.
2006-07-28 06:17:58 · answer #9 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
creepy..what are you trying to say..plz do not confuse ur girlfriend more..im sure if she really had feelings for she will not care about poems..besides what do men think about other then sex..? hehe
2006-07-28 06:19:14 · answer #10 · answered by luvs2play06 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Get a new girlfriend (it sounds like you are now available), because your poetry is beyond compare.
2006-07-28 07:00:41 · answer #11 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋