Here is a poem that I wrote about my son while i was dealing with Cancer treatment...
My Son's Prayer
Jul 08 '02
.......Children make life and death seem simple............
Sometimes I shake inside
My son noticed it today
That my heart was growing cold
He said, "Don't cry Momma,
Cuz the streets are paved with gold."
My boy is only four,
But his faith is as strong.
Such as can be,
He told me all he knew.
He told me all that he sees.
He told me that the LORD LOVES ME,
But that he lives so far away,
But we could have him in our hearts,
If we would only stop to pray.
My son grabbed my trembling hands.
He said that I should pray now,
So that my tears would go away.
I picked my chin up,
As my proud son said his prayer.
I then felt the Lord's presence.
I felt it in the air.
"Please MY LORD, help my Momma be happy!
She is having a bad day
Cuz she don't like her doctor.
PLEASE MAKE HIM GO AWAY!"
Gosh, I love my son Lord.
I am sorry my faith has not been so strong.
Thank you for showing me hope.
I have needed this for so long.
I am thankful that I am here today.
My Son is such a joy.
I thank you for this message,
and this very special boy!
I will do my best.
2006-07-27 21:20:47
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answered by barbaradjt 5
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He's talking about his 360 page, which can be found in his profile. It was not the saddest. I don't know why your wife was crying. It was a good poem, but maybe it would make a better lyric.
2006-07-27 21:21:17
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answered by Anonymous
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i think of using EMOTICONS in a written tale/e book are effective. some traditionally publidhed authors like Lauren Marycle have already finished it (i think of she wrote the e book "Ttfn" or some thing, and different stuff. one among her books is written thoroughly in text cloth lingo or with emoticons). Plus the *** did all this YEARS in the past, like lower back in 2001 or some thing with the aid of fact this one guy revealed a cellular telephone novel (they have a acceptance in *** yet I forgot). besides, The cellular telephone novel exchange into some form of romance and grew to alter into so common that a action picture exchange into produced from it, and it additionally grew to alter into valuable action picture! additionally, that cellular novel spawned an entire series (like the Twlight or Vampire Academy 'series' to illustrate yet purely for the cellular telephone). AND those cellular novels have been so common they handed a great variety of classic books on the bestseller's lists. this is ALL genuine with the aid of fact I appeared those products up like a year in the past. you additionally can Google 'cellular telephone novels' and check out Wikipedia with the aid of fact this is there. the only element is i think of it may be aimed in the direction of babies, you be responsive to, people who'd in many cases be responsive to the language you desire to characteristic into your tale. additionally, no longer TOO many people in maximum circumstances understand text cloth language and emoticons so which you will no longer get as many readers than you are able to with common English (and written in all risk at a 2d grade examining point as nicely with the aid of fact maximum anybody is 'claimed' to be semi-literate with the aid of researchers). besides, sturdy success!!
2016-10-08 10:09:28
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answered by schugmann 4
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Okay..... we cannot tell you why. We have not even seen your blog.
Maybe you should talk to her. Women tend to like that kind of thing. Especially when you let them talk back.
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After looking at the 360... I can now tell that his question was a shameless plug to get people to look at his 360.
2006-07-27 21:18:05
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answered by lotherius 3
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Show me the blog and I will tell you whether or not it is the saddest blog ever written. :)
2006-07-27 21:17:51
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answered by Jo Ann 6
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Cos u didn't confide in her first before writing?
2006-07-27 21:16:33
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answered by band_craze4f 3
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There's always worse out there.
2006-07-27 21:14:53
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answered by Anonymous
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