Your English command is not so bad, but here is a quick edit:
As you know, today is my last working day in Detroit. It has been a pleasure working with all of you. Thank you for all of your support and cooperation.
Note: comma after "know"
I'm not a fan of the word "nice"
I formalized it slightly to "thank you" --it's not that formal and you are thanking them
"Cooperation" should not be hyphenated.
Good luck!
2006-07-27 02:27:54
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answer #1
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answered by Da Whispering Genius 4
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How about:
As most of you already know, today is my last working day in Detroit. It has been nice working with all of you. I would sincerely like to thank each and every one of you for your support and cooperation.
2006-07-27 09:27:15
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answer #2
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answered by flamingo_sandy 6
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As you all know, today is my last working day in Detroit. It has been nice working with all of you.
Thank you for all your support and co-operation.
2006-07-27 09:25:31
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answered by IK 2
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You should say cooperation instead co-operation...its a single word...comes from to cooperate, co is a prefix that binded with operation suggests "working together with someone"... And you should put a comma after "know" :P
2006-07-27 09:26:55
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answered by Cyberpunk 1
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I used Microsoft Word 2003 to check your sentence. Word shows the spelling and grammar are correct.
2006-07-27 09:29:01
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answer #5
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answered by vacation4me 3
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you do better than a lot of Americans who were born here do, don't worry about it your english is very good, you are being way to hard on yourself by saying you are very bad at it, you only made one error and it was in saying I am very bad in english, it's I am very bad at english, in which case you are not very bad at it, you are pretty good at it, keep up the good work you are doing on it though, english speaking people appreciate people that try and or make an effort to practice it and do better, at least I do anyways
2006-07-27 09:33:49
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answer #6
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answered by Anonymous
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"As you know, today is my last working day in Detroit. It has been nice working with all of you. Thanks for all of your support and co-operation."
(that will be fine....I think)
2006-07-27 09:30:28
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answered by fullyprepared 1
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Your resignation letter is good. It is phrased well and all the spelling is correct.
Your question is phrased poorly. What you want to say is:
"I do not know the English language very well."
(Not 'I am bad in English language'... this is grammatically incorrect.)
2006-07-27 09:27:14
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answer #8
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answered by crazyotto65 5
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"As you know today is my last working day in Detriot. It was really nice working with all of you.Thanks for all your support and co-operation."
2006-07-27 09:46:39
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answered by AD^ONIS 3
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Good job with the grammar. Like one of the other answerers said, place a comma after "As you know," so that it sounds better.
2006-07-27 09:25:31
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answer #10
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answered by Meg...Out of Hybernation 6
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