Sorry this has nothing to do with parenting but I have a few problems with my expression and grammer, and I was wondering if somebody could tell me if this sentence is gramatically correct, and if not, how to fix it. Thanks.
"This particular trip had a major impact on me for many reasons, one of which I chose to discuss in my story."
2006-07-27 02:21:32 · 9 answers · asked by Anonymous in Pregnancy & Parenting ➔ Parenting
it's o.k., but i would break it up.
this particular trip had a major impact on me for many reasons. one reason, in particular, I have chosen to discuss in my story.
something along those lines....
have fun writing!
2006-07-27 02:28:40 · answer #1 · answered by joey322 6 · 2⤊ 3⤋
Your sentence is grammatically correct. But, if I have to point out a mistake --- your spelling of "grammar" is not.
The sentence is acceptable as it is; but it's context in your story will determine whether you use the word "choose" or "chose".
If you begin your write-up with this sentence, you will have to use the verb form "choose"; however, if this is like your closing line, at the end of your write-up, then your sentence is correct.
2006-07-27 02:31:11 · answer #2 · answered by Ameya 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
This particular trip had a major impact on me for many reasons, one of which I chose to discuss in my story."
instead how about
I chose to discuss this trip in my story because of the major impact it had on me.
2006-07-27 02:25:42 · answer #3 · answered by isellpc 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
You sentence appears to be grammatically correct. I see no problems. Now all you have to do is continue the paragraph and explain your reason.
2006-07-27 02:29:56 · answer #4 · answered by Shar 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
George W. Bush is one of the greatest leaders of the free world.
2006-07-27 04:17:49 · answer #5 · answered by adamtosman 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
There's nothing at all wrong with the sentence, but it's spelled "grammar."
2006-07-27 02:35:14 · answer #6 · answered by cross-stitch kelly 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
definite, the "S" in Spanish and the "E" in English are meant to be capitalized on account that they're the names of languages. additionally, you elect a colon after "languages" to teach which you rather choose the reader to pause somewhat, and that a itemizing is to persist with, which may well be "spanish and english." each and everything else is advantageous.
2016-11-03 02:43:45 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
hi I think your sentence is correct except one little mistake : "chose" is "choose" :)))
2006-07-27 02:28:10 · answer #8 · answered by diana 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
sounds good to me
2006-07-27 02:41:15 · answer #9 · answered by bubblez_cb 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋