we were kind of dating and everybody just pressured and pressued until she finally got back with her 2 weeks recent ex.. she told me it was just easier because it would make everybody be happier and its what everybody wanted. I wrote her this poem to say how i felt. What do you think of it and what do you think she'll think of it? i havent even talked to her since i gave it to her earlier today b/c im nervous about what she'll say. I wrote her a letter too explaining how i felt in more detail.
She left me before we were even really together
My love for her will last forever
I felt betrayed and alone
I really needed to talk to her but I couldn’t even get her on the phone
Instead of me she decided to be with another person
Which could only make our relationship worsen
I really wanted to know what to do to win her back
She said us together would be too hard and we would just end up being sad
At that moment I swear I could feel my heart crack
Life with him would be easier
Even though our movies together would always be cheesier
It seemed them together was what the whole world wanted
It would make everyone happy and everything would be right
But I didn’t want to go down without a fight
Love should be stronger than convenience any day
That wasn’t going to be there case here no matter how much I prayed
I felt like I would give her the world
She wouldn’t even give me a chance
Because things may not work out
With our amazing romance
She thought we were destined to fail
That our relationship would end really fast
That our love wasn’t strong enough so it wouldn’t last
I know with all of my heart that it would
Even though I may never get the opportunity that I should
To show her how much I love and adore her
Honey I love you sooooooo much, just give me a chance to show you?
2006-07-26 10:04:51 · 12 answers · asked by Anonymous in Family & Relationships ➔ Singles & Dating
OMG this is soo sad. I almost want to cry for you. Well I just need to know was this mutual between you two. I mean the love? Well you've seen in the movies she may choose him now but later she will realize that she was happier with you and nothing else will be able to fill that gap. Im sorry ur hurting alot but try to keep your mind focused on something else go hang out with ur friends just in case it doesnt end up the way you want. ..... Oh and the poem was lovely she will definitely like it.
2006-07-26 10:11:25 · answer #1 · answered by just another hot mama 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
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2016-05-08 07:02:08 · answer #2 · answered by ? 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
it was really good she should like it im so sry that she did that to u but i hope u win her over wit this poem which u should cuz i kno if i was this girl and i got this poem i would choose u over the guy i was wit so good luck and i hope u get her and if u do i hope yall have a great relationship and i want to kno if u get her so if u want to tell me or if u just want to talk sometime about things that are goin on ill be here just email me at bballjs09@yahoo.com or u can im me at bballjs09 i will always be there so if u need help just come to me if u want to
2006-07-26 14:21:28 · answer #3 · answered by jenna s 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
good poem,but don try and get her back dude if she broke ur heart shes not worth it,remember this,the girl that really lovs u wouldnt make u cry
2006-07-26 14:18:40 · answer #4 · answered by Gollum 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
oh u poem is really gud i think shell love it. If u really think u two can work things out will fight for it
2006-07-26 14:18:52 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
how old are you guys, and why do u want her back after she left you like that? she obviously broke your heart. the poem is good though...
2006-07-26 10:17:08 · answer #6 · answered by bumblebee 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
10/10. Best poem i ever read.
2006-07-26 14:25:45 · answer #7 · answered by TheGame555 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
ohhhhhhhhhhh....... I love it so much, I hope she comes back to you. If she doesn't than she aint worth the pain.good luck. My heart goes to you
2006-07-26 14:18:01 · answer #8 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
excellent really expresses how the person felt.
2006-07-26 14:20:33 · answer #9 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
not bad
2006-07-26 14:16:58 · answer #10 · answered by faithscoolstuff 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋