hit it up to my rap
you start to dance and then snap
chicks dance to my songs
they even like how it sounds
im the next generation
breake it down for the whole damn nation
im heare every day
yall now where i stay
PHX six o two
wander why im so cool
i rap this sh** all th way
breke the rules of the game
not doin it for fame
reppin the west
hell yeah we da best
soon ill be in videos
youll be hearin my song #1 in the radios
i bounce in da streets people ask my name
im called the soldier best there is around
ill make yall dance until you hit the ground
girls startin to pop their stuff
rockin my timberlands never been in a cuff
i don't do drugs or beer
ill i do is watch my peeps cheer
haven't boned a chick
soon cameras will be on me snap click
don't ask who yall know who i am
im a celebrity hanging wit uncle sam
they say im a freak but check mi flow
i know how to stay up don't hustle
cheack me out im a fool grown playa
im out
how do you like it
2006-07-25 08:38:41 · 14 answers · asked by Anonymous in Arts & Humanities ➔ Performing Arts
Step by step rap!jeje it's a beginin
2006-07-25 09:50:31 · answer #1 · answered by ? 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Wow...its good if you want to be somebody that doesn't really say anything in their songs and just talks about themselves. You sound like you think your a hard a** in the song, but obviousely your not, by the things you say in your song. And don't get me wrong, its good you don't do drugs, or beer or have sex. Your only 12. Your good with ryhm and words. Just try to write something from the soul. Something that isn't just saying, look how cool I am. If you were cool, you'd have something more to say than that. I believe in you that you are talented enough to do that. Just try it. You'll amaze yourself.
ps And don't listen to the guy below that said you better learn how to spell first. I wrote poetry when I was 12 too, and it was damn good. You can know how to write well, and not know how to spell well. They are not the same thing. Just write your stuff down first the way you want to, then proff read it. After all the creativity aspect is the important part, the mechanics can come later.
2006-07-25 15:48:27 · answer #2 · answered by Green Tea Happy 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Semi-decent for a 12 year old...stop talking about yourself in a demeaning, (in the music scene) way. Say, I'm sippin on patron...lookin through my phone find the chick I wanna bone. others like that...good christian rap however...christian rap sucks a LOT...not the meaning the music..
2006-07-25 15:46:51 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
if you really want someone to take you seriouslty then you need to rap about something real that people will be lured to something deep i mean something they wouldnt expect from a 12 year old not some same crap we hear every day no offense but keep your head up
2006-07-25 16:13:23 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Take it easy there pal. You're only 12.
"girls startin to pop their stuff"
"haven't boned a chick"
2006-07-25 15:43:22 · answer #5 · answered by Katelyn 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
it`s a good start for a 12 years child.
2006-07-25 16:29:29 · answer #6 · answered by Vilma K 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Terrible. Sorry
2006-07-25 15:40:53 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
It's a start.
2006-07-25 15:42:26 · answer #8 · answered by wmp55 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
if you are indeed only twleve, no one will take you seriously....
i guess its cool, its just weird comming from a 12 year old and all.
2006-07-25 15:46:32 · answer #9 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
for a 12 y. old it's decent.
2006-07-25 15:41:51 · answer #10 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋