Dear Sir/Ma'am;
Greetings!
Below is my resume in response to the job posting for volunteering job. Which I saw on Indian woman job listing. I have a personal interests in helping my neighbors.
I don't have experienced in this area, but I'm willing to learn. I would like to
consider this opportunity and work with you.
Please email me. Thank you very much.
Sincerely yours,
Aida.
2006-07-25 04:59:16 · 11 answers · asked by Anonymous in Society & Culture ➔ Languages
Sure, here:
Greetings!
Below is my resume in response to the job posting for volunteering job, which I saw on Indian woman job listing.
I have a personal interest in helping my neighbors.
I don't have experienced in this area, but I'm willing to learn. I would like to be consider for this opportunity... I'm looking forward to work with you! Contact me via email at xxxx@xxx.com. Thank you very much.
Sincerely yours,
Aida.
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The changes are:
1. Don't break the sentence in the word "Which". Use a comma and continue...
2. You have "a" personal "interest" (that's singular).
3. You want to "to be consider for". The opportunity is there. You already decided you want take it. It all depends on them now!
4. Give them your email address!
2006-07-25 05:07:01 · answer #1 · answered by Karin 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Dear Sir/Ma'am;
Greetings!
Below is my resume in response to the job posting for a volunteer job, which I saw on a job list. I have a personal interest in helping my neighbors.
I don't have any experience in this domain, but I'm willing to learn. I would like to consider this an opportunity to work with you.
I will be grateful to hear an answer from you as soon as possible.
Sincerely,
Aida.
This is the best that I could do, but take what I wrote into consideration before u send it to whom you want.
2006-07-25 05:09:27 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Dear Sir or Madam,
Below is my resume which I am sending to you in response to the job posting for the volunteering position you posted on the Indian Woman job listing. I have a personal interest in helping my neighbors, have limited experience in this area, but I am willing to learn. I would like to take advantage of this opportunity and work with you.
Please email me in response to this letter.
Sincerely yours,
Aida.
2006-07-25 05:10:57 · answer #3 · answered by Don't look too close! 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Corrections:
Below is my resume in response to your posting for the volunteering job, which I saw on the [Indian woman job listing]
(There MUST be another way to phrase this. Try the name of the listing.)
I have a personal interest in helping my neighbors.
I don't have experience in this area, but I'm willing to learn. I would like you to consider me for this opportunity, and look forward to working with you. I can be reached via email at "XXXX@XXXX.com". Thank you very much.
Sincerely yours,
Aida (your last name? Don't assume first name basis.)
2006-07-25 05:07:00 · answer #4 · answered by rsantos19 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
To whom it may concern,
Greetings!
Below is my resume in response to the posting for a volunteer position. Specifically for an Indian woman. I have a personal interest in helping my neighbors.
Although I don't have experience in this area I'm willing to learn. I would like to consider this opportunity and work with you.
Thank you very much and I will be readily awaiting your response.
Sincerely,
Aida
2006-07-25 10:17:17 · answer #5 · answered by Lydia 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Below is my resume in response to your job posting for a volunteer job, which I saw on "Indian Woman" job listing. I have a personal interest in helping my neighbors and, even though I don't currently have experience in this area, I am willing to learn.
Please consider me for this opportunity and e-mail me with your response. I look forward to working with you. Thank you.
Sincerely,
2006-07-25 05:07:41 · answer #6 · answered by beattyb 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I have attached my resume in response to the volunteering position advertised on the Indian Women job listing service. My passion for helping the community combined with my ability to learn quickly would be an asset to your organization.
Please feel free to contact me with any questions you may have in regards to my qualifications for this position.
Sincerely,
Aida
2006-07-25 05:07:51 · answer #7 · answered by gemgrl19 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
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2016-12-14 13:30:07 · answer #8 · answered by ? 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Firstly, you never want to emphasize any negatives such as 'you have no experience' instead put down some similar experience you have that they're looking for.
Employers want to know what value you can bring to the company...'tell us why we should hire you'?.
Be confident and creatively promote yourself POSITIVELY!
(P.S. change 'you have personal interests in helping your neighors to 'you have excellent public relations skills').
2006-07-25 05:10:29 · answer #9 · answered by sunshine25 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Your letter needs some work. I would give you more help, but i am not sure if you are just wasting everyone's time. People play to many games here. Sorry!
2006-07-25 05:05:18 · answer #10 · answered by little fairy lady 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋