It's called:
To Those Whose Works I Love
I find myself uncertain
of all my thoughts expressed
I will strong words from my pen
but end up with a mess
Adoring the works of those
who stand so far above
I dream of skills even close
to those whose works I love
So again and again, I marry my pen
to papers, plain and bare
I write, erase, and continue to chase
the works beyond compare...
I don't want to hear anything lame about how poems don't rhyme anymore either. I can do whatever I want...
2006-07-24 12:59:01 · 3 answers · asked by Anonymous in Education & Reference ➔ Other - Education
I've always wanted to, give me info...
2006-07-24 13:43:27 · update #1
I like the third stanza, too. The implied metaphor of "marrying" and "chasing" with papers and poems being like women is clever, as the other answerer said. Do you want to join a poetry society? I am in the Utah State Poetry Society, but we have members from outside the state as well.
2006-07-24 13:24:33 · answer #1 · answered by Cookie777 6 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Pretty good...I especially like that third stanza; it has good meter and is clever.
2006-07-24 20:03:58 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
hey i write poetry 2 ...i like it keep doin wat u do mayb u shuld enter some of ur poems or future poems in a contest or soemthin
2006-07-24 20:05:57 · answer #3 · answered by nikki s 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋