I missed her quinceanera (15th birthday) and in Mexico being 15 is real important to a girl. If you guys have any ideas on how to make it better please tell me. I only have until tommorow to send it.
Ruby I'm sorry I missed your quinceanera, I really wanted to go
But I couldn't cuz it was my mom's birthday the day before
Im gonna say somethin Ive been hiding inside, but i couldnt tell u cuz i was shy
You r smart n wierd in your own cool way, and im sorry i missed your birthday
You make me laugh and u make me smile
I hope i do the same to u atleast once in a while
When Im with u I feel careles, I feel free, I believe
I think you're beautiful too
I get nervous and goosebumbs when Im around you
Friends are angels without wings
And you are a real close friend to me
If I cant have a realationship with you, I atleast want to be your friend
I hope u had a great birthday
THE END
2006-07-23 05:53:00 · 13 answers · asked by El Chivo 1 in Family & Relationships ➔ Singles & Dating
It made me say awwwwwww.....awwwwwwwwwww thats so sweet lol.
2006-07-23 06:49:00 · answer #1 · answered by Danyizzle 4 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Your poem, a few ideas...
I missed your quinceanera, I wanted to go
But my mom's birthday was the day before
I'm gonna say something
that's been inside,
I haven't told you, because I was shy
You're smart...and weird, in a cool way
Sorry I missed your special day
You've made me laugh, you've made me smile
Do I do the same for you, at least once in a while?
When I'm with you, I feel careless and free
you're a beautiful angel on earth, to me
I get nervous and goosebumps
when you are around
A more special person could not be found
Friends are angels without wings
And you've been a real close friend to me
I hope you always will be my friend...
and so, this bouquet of thoughts
to you I send...
Happy Birthday!
The End
2006-07-24 10:26:54 · answer #2 · answered by elcycer 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Ruby
I am sorry that I missed such an important day in your life
I realize that your Quinceanera doesn't come twice
Being the woman that you are I know you will understand
The day before was my mom's birthday and the family had plans
I'm gonna say something I've been keeping inside
I couldn't bring myself to say it because I was just too shy
I think you are smart and weird in your own cool way
Let me say I am sorry again for missing your birthday
You make me laugh and smile, I hope I do the same for you
When I am with you I feel carefree and I think you are beautiful too
I get shy and nervous when you come around
Am I good enough to be in a relationship with you?
I ask myself that question everyday
I cherish our friendship in every way
If you won't have me as your man
At least we still have each other as friends
I would not give that up for the world
I think you are a special girl
I hope you had a great birthday
Again I am sorry I missed that special day.
2006-07-23 13:11:18 · answer #3 · answered by crystlizm 4 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Thats cool put in in a nice card for her and send it with one long stem rose for each year of her life 15 right if you cant afford the roses get a loan.
2006-07-23 13:14:38 · answer #4 · answered by jamnjims 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
i think it sounds letter-like, maybe u should write her a letter, explaining how u feel and everything, so instead of focusing on making it rhyme, u could go deeply on how u feel, i always thought love letters were better than poems, its just more intimate u know, but its a cute poem, if u want to send her a poem, go ahead and send that one, i bet she'll love it, good luck to u
2006-07-23 13:01:12 · answer #5 · answered by ndine_5 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
That is so beautiful! Send it without any hesitation! She is a lucky young lady!
2006-07-23 13:59:03 · answer #6 · answered by amelia_madeline 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
its alright but you sound like u were crying get over it she will have a nother b-day just like yo mamma
2006-07-23 13:03:17 · answer #7 · answered by lil bowwow 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Before you send it, change "cuz" to 'cause, and "u" to "you," etc. But other than that, nice job.
2006-07-23 12:56:33 · answer #8 · answered by xXPolitically IncorrectXx 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
HER HURT WILL TEAR APART WITH JOY WHEN SHE READS IT!!!!!
2006-07-23 13:03:29 · answer #9 · answered by Star H 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I like it...Good luck to you :-)
2006-07-23 12:56:59 · answer #10 · answered by Karen 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋