Justice for the light blue eyes:
The light blue eyes said something,
Desperately needing confront,
The shirt was something hiding,
That should make justice up front
For now I knew that the kid with light blue eyes,
Had a terrible heart ache,
After all the time living with the unwise,
He just had to have fait
The hole in the striped red and orange shirt,
Was showing a piece of pinkish skin,
That he was freshly beaten like if he was dirt,
And finally in his eyes I was in
Now I could see everything,
The instance I came up to his eyes,
The eyes made me feel like if I should be forcing,
The justice, I had to make for the kid of light blue eyes.
2006-07-20 09:34:25 · 5 answers · asked by Jennifer 3 in Education & Reference ➔ Other - Education
Sounds good. I like the way you tried to make visual as if it were acutally me with the boy with light blue eyes. You did a good job keep up the good work!!
2006-07-20 09:40:15 · answer #1 · answered by baby gyrl 2 · 1⤊ 2⤋
great poem!! i didnt read it tho it was too long, and not to be racist or anything lol i dont like people with blue eyes
sorry lol
2006-07-20 16:38:55 · answer #2 · answered by deadly_donkey 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Your poem is good
You wrote it down
And now you should
Go out of town!
2006-07-20 16:39:57 · answer #3 · answered by darlaman2000 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Creative, intriguing, keep up the good work.
2006-07-20 16:51:56 · answer #4 · answered by In God's Image 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Made me feel sad. So that's good.
2006-07-20 16:40:07 · answer #5 · answered by auntkarendjjb 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋