How good is my English?

Question

I'm trying to improve my English, can you judge mine?
Some anwers of mine :

I'm gonna explain you the football rules :
who scores more goals, he wins.
No matter the ball possession, no matter the number of shots, no matter the corner kicks..no matter anything else, you just have to score.
If you shot 5146565161 times and you can't make goal, sorry You Go Home..

I think zidane's behaviour is to blame and he sholud feel ashemed for what he did. Football is not a war, you can't beat anyone. I hope Fifa remove the prize to him.
The whole world criticize him and french people should feel ashamed...he behaved like a stupid whining child that plays football for the first time...zidane go home!

Answer 1

It's pretty good- let me take what you wrote and correct it.

I'm going to explain the football rules to you :
whoever scores more goals, wins.
No matter the ball possession, no matter the number of shots, no matter the corner kicks..no matter anything else, you just have to score.
If you shot 5146565161 times and you can't make a goal, sorry -You Go Home..

I think zidane's behaviour is to blame and he should feel ashamed for what he did. Football is not a war, you can't beat anyone. I hope Fifa takes the prize away from him.
The whole world criticizes him and french people should feel ashamed...he behaved like a stupid whining child playing football for the first time...zidane go home!

Not too many corrections! I can tell you're not a native speaker but I can understand everything you're trying to say.

Answer 2

OK, I refuse to judge, but I will help. OK?

"I´m going to explain football rules to you:
The winner is the one who scores the most goals.
No matter which team has the ball, or the number of shots thrown, or how many corner kicks, the bottom line is to score a goal. If you made 5146565161 shots and don't score a goal, sorry, you go home, no second chance for your team."

"I think Zidane's behavior was inexcusable, and he should feel
ashamed for what he did. Football is not war, you can´t just go
and beat anyone you want. I hope FIFA takes away the prize
awarded to him. The entire world is criticizing him and the french should feel ashamed. He behaved like a stupid whining child as if playing football for the first time.... Zidane go home!

OK, done.
Hope it helps,
Stay well and I agree, Zidane, go home.....

Answer 3

not bad but you need some improvement in grammar and stuff...

corrected version of what you said:

I'm going to explain to you the rules of football:
the team that scores the most goals, wins.
ball possession, the number of shots made, the corner kicks or anything else doesnt matter. you just have to score.
If you shoot 5146565161 times and you can't make goal, sorry You Go Home..

i think zidane's behavior is to blame and he should be ashamed of what he did. football is not war. you shouldnt hit anyone (or use violence at all). i hope fifa retracts the prize given to him. the whole world is criticizing him and french people should be ashamed. he behaved like a stupid whining child playing football for the firs time. zidane, go home!

Answer 4

You have a good vocabulary, but you use some words a bit wrong. I mean, you don't have much mistakes, and the once that you have are not that awful.

Keep learning and practicing, and you'll be fine.

Answer 5

not bad you need improvment good luck

Answer 6

IS THIS UR FIRST TIME TYPING IN ENGISH????? CUZ FOR DA FRIST TIME IT IS NOT THAT BAD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
but u will get the hang of it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
GOOD luck!!!!!!!!!!!

Answer 7

it is kinda uh....... bad. please don't report me. It is ok but you can improve on it.