I told myself that God had forgotten me...
After a lifetime of pain and nights filled with loneliness
He had no one for me to love
Just move on, it will be ok.
And then I met you.
I knew it was all wrong,
But I looked into your beautiful eyes... and I let you in...
Into my heart, into my family, into my home.
You gave me hope when I had none.
You took my hand and let me think about
A life with a man who will always love me....
I hid my love when young till I
Couldn't bear the buzzing of a fly;
I hid my love to my despite
Till I could not bear to look at light:
I dare not gaze upon her face
But left her memory in each place;
Where eer I saw a wild flower lie
I kissed and bade my love good bye.
2006-07-19 12:35:38 · 11 answers · asked by Anonymous in Entertainment & Music ➔ Jokes & Riddles
if u have written them they are great keep working at it am sure ur best still to come. of they are someone elses they are great and their best is still to come.
2006-07-19 12:39:38 · answer #1 · answered by ayman524 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
part of the top poem felt like me (for when you lose someone you love God may seem none existent) but it was a beautiful poem.
2006-07-19 12:42:13 · answer #2 · answered by Riklionheart 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Somebody will probably report you for being in the wrong category
2006-07-19 12:38:25 · answer #3 · answered by twiztidsdad 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I think I just saw inside your soul
2006-07-19 12:38:38 · answer #4 · answered by tom j 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
beautiful. i think u should find a tune (tone) for this poem. it'll make a wonderful song.
2006-07-19 12:42:31 · answer #5 · answered by atticus 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
beautiful
2006-07-19 12:38:20 · answer #6 · answered by Hannah=brokenteeth 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
wonderful
2006-07-19 12:50:04 · answer #7 · answered by ♥*~me~*♥ 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
sad and depressing for me
2006-07-19 12:38:54 · answer #8 · answered by BrianKSE2006 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
most excellent
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2006-07-19 12:41:11 · answer #9 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
9/10.......good one
2006-07-19 12:43:12 · answer #10 · answered by *Neha.* 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋