If you haven't seen my other one, check it out on my Q&A.. Here goes.. It's called..
The Discovery
Love is the slowest form of suicide
I'm killing myself softly
Your words are like blades
They go deep into my skin and affect my insides..
Your touch is like poison
It quickly runs over my body
You touch my hands,
And I feel it from my toes to my memory glands
It's not suicide! Your words are the killer
Your lies hide behind a chocolatey-smooth voice
Your weapon is well hidden...
How did I give you such control??
I let you get such a hold,
And you're not letting go..
It's killing me softly.
Your weapons are your promises
You shot me with your love,
You stabbed with your trust,
You choked me with your kiss,
And you kill me when we fuss..
But is it really you killing me??
Or am I doing it to myself..
I'm commiting a suicide, killing what's left in my heart...
Additional Details
4 weeks ago
I didn't finish it, I just thought of it regarding my stupid relationship... Rate it please?? 1-10. Really hope you like it because I was feeling it when I wrote it...
2006-07-17 15:53:18 · 15 answers · asked by Anonymous in Entertainment & Music ➔ Jokes & Riddles
wow... thats so dark and depressing... hope you feel better :)
2006-07-17 16:02:14 · answer #1 · answered by iamigloo 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
7
2006-07-17 16:19:42 · answer #2 · answered by michell w 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I liked it. Have you ever thought of posting anything on www.poetry.com. I have some stuff there, if you want to look.
Just type in my name Marsha Ozborn. Sometimes they pick you to be in a book. It's kinda cool
2006-07-17 16:47:54 · answer #3 · answered by mizbehavingirl 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
i imagine you lied about some issues, You seem somewhat large interior the face. Sorry if that isn't any longer what you needed to take heed to . once you post your image on the information superhighway you're begging to be criticized.
2016-10-14 22:03:42 · answer #4 · answered by ? 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I got bored after the second line.
2006-07-17 15:56:25 · answer #5 · answered by Katie 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Have you thought seriously about turning it into a song? Creed?
Fuel?
2006-07-17 16:30:44 · answer #6 · answered by jmiller 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Once again, very good. 10. I can relate.
2006-07-17 16:00:02 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
once again i liked it 9
2006-07-17 16:23:12 · answer #8 · answered by memyself 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
ok 8/10
2006-07-18 01:26:09 · answer #9 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
By chance are you still in high school?
2006-07-17 15:57:09 · answer #10 · answered by Alyssie 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
memory glands? I've heard of MAMMARY glands, but not memory glands
2006-07-17 16:00:12 · answer #11 · answered by scratchwhiplash 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋