Lets make Love
I love you, like nothing else,
way you look at me,
its the darkness attracting me
I am addicted to your smell,
I want to feel it, be with it,
till I forget all smells,
those thoughts of sin are attracting me
what is the taste of your tongue,
your lips are inviting,
a sin in this society
your hairs, your shadow,
will be my bed partners,
in whiles, when you will sleep
hold you in my arms ,
till you don't feel like standing anymore,
pick you up, lay your pain down,
paint you with my hands,
seven colours of rainbow,
take your prints on my body'
till every sign can be feeled
I think nothing else but you,
when their is a shooting star,
I wish this dream might come true
I want to breathe your breath,
'cause its path to the temple,
shrine where your soul live,
there I want to live,
till my breath get dissolve
2006-07-17 08:39:24 · 6 answers · asked by Anonymous in Family & Relationships ➔ Singles & Dating
A poem doesn't need to sound or look good, as long as it's from your heart. If it's from your heart, and you have put enough effort into it, it's the greatest poem that have ever existed to your partner.
~Thomas
2006-07-17 08:44:29 · answer #1 · answered by tomhanken 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Amazing. Simply amazing. :-) Keep going!
2006-07-17 21:44:48 · answer #2 · answered by singinfooljdog 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
great poem
2006-07-17 15:52:20 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
i love ur poem honey! :)
2006-07-17 15:49:36 · answer #4 · answered by i crave yours 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
too confusing, no pattern
2006-07-17 15:45:35 · answer #5 · answered by RomanGOD 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I ain't much on poetry....
2006-07-17 15:43:45 · answer #6 · answered by lovesyourdiamond 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋