- His Brutal Hand -
Splattered tears drentched the ground where I lay
Breathing took a minate to remember the way
I tried and tried
I failed and failed
My head held an inpossible pain
I felt my heart beating in my brain
He just walked so coldly away
Leaving me to my own aid
Looking I saw it all
So much, so scared
Dripping and running it smuthered my face
Bleeding
Bleeding
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Its about an ex.......
2006-07-17 07:37:13 · 3 answers · asked by Nikki 4 in Health ➔ Mental Health
Who are you to say what I have and haven't been through!!!! I was in an abusive relationship for a year.
2006-07-17 07:43:43 · update #1
its great
2006-07-17 10:32:13 · answer #1 · answered by daidiiro 2 · 3⤊ 1⤋
It's nice as far as poetry goes. But I don't think you've ever actually been hit before.
2006-07-17 14:41:35 · answer #2 · answered by murph_ltt 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
that was so buddy i can't believe you wrote that
2006-07-17 14:41:09 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋