(chorus)
Ridin rims ridin dubs on my escalade
i walk the red carpet on the day parade
Ride rims ridin dubs on my escalade
hear this raps song is what i made
(verse one)
Ridin everyday pimpin and ballin
im on the phone my chicks callin
cant touch this pimpin don't even try
we'll knuckle up ill make you cry
pick up my hoe at the street
any where we meet
i'll set it down
pimpin balla playa you found
don't hate im better than freaken bow wow
i may be not holleywood but thats now
ill breake it up for you uno dos three
it west coast in deed
im the new generation of snoop doggy dogg
its clear now i came out the fog
how can you not like the number one mac dady
gettin up ready to party
who turned off the stage lights this ain't an encore
its a concert ans the peeps want more
talk to me ill give yall like
im rappin out with my mic
ill finish the rest later tell me what you think
2006-07-16 17:45:02 · 7 answers · asked by Anonymous in Arts & Humanities ➔ Performing Arts
this is the 4th time ive answered
2006-07-16 17:50:34 · answer #1 · answered by voodoochild 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
You are only 12 years old, however you are trying to sound like everyone else. You are the new generation, sound like it. Avoid the trends that past rappers use. Not bad for a little kid, but I have heard better. The best thing to do is up your vocabulary. Read and understand.
2006-07-16 17:51:00 · answer #2 · answered by heatfan_0634 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Needs some work.
2006-07-16 17:49:13 · answer #3 · answered by kearneyconsulting 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It's okay, but to be honest with you, a twelve-year-old shouldn't be writing stuff like this.
2006-07-16 18:03:17 · answer #4 · answered by InfiniteAri 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
it aint that bad, except the ho part. but its aiight. just some wanna be pimp who think he da sh!t like most of these rappers out here
2006-07-16 17:50:53 · answer #5 · answered by a black chick 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
pretty awful
2006-07-16 17:51:15 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Not so good.
2006-07-16 17:49:30 · answer #7 · answered by julielove327 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋