The Victorian Era brought with it a time period of not only industrialization and development, but also the division of society into social classes.
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The Victorian Era brought with it not only a time period of industrialization and development, but also the division of the society into social classes.
This will be my opening statement for an essay....which one sounds better and do u think it's good enough?
2006-07-15 08:11:43 · 5 answers · asked by Rollester 4 in Education & Reference ➔ Other - Education
Neither. The Victorian Era was a time period, so to say that the era brought a time period is redundant.
Try something like:
The Victorian Era was a time period of unprecedented industrialization and development. Unfortunately, with this growth the gaps in society between social classes also grew.
2006-07-15 08:23:27 · answer #1 · answered by LEMME ANSWER THAT! 6 · 3⤊ 1⤋
I like the second one. I think it's worded very clearly and helps the essay sound professional and interestingly informative.
2006-07-15 08:16:37 · answer #2 · answered by fawkesfire13 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
how about "time period not only of industrialization"
2006-07-15 08:18:01 · answer #3 · answered by snowbunny 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
the 2nd one is better
2006-07-15 14:05:23 · answer #4 · answered by Ichigo Lunette 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
the second is more user friendly....use this one.
2006-07-15 08:15:43 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋