Morning Ramble
What a beautiful day God has given,
What a rare and beautiful sight,
So pleasant is the sunrise,
That follows such a night.
The earth shouts her greeting,
The wind whispers be still.
God is with you always,
Of love and life take fill.
I'm tired but I'm joyous,
The night over and in need of rest.
God's birds are singing lullabyes,
He knows just what is best.
Peace be with you brother,
My sister go in love.
God spreads His love unceasing.
He's watching from above.
Thank you for the sunrise,
The wind, the rain, the air.
I thank You for my family,friends.
For all Your love and care.
2006-07-15 02:58:49 · 22 answers · asked by Debra M. Wishing Peace To All 7 in Society & Culture ➔ Religion & Spirituality
By the way, I didn't expect atheists to appreciate it anyway as they can't appreciate the One whom it is about.
Peace
2006-07-15 03:05:50 · update #1
A very basic, But nicely done bow to the powers that be. All in All, I'd give it a seven out of 10...ZYou are on your way!! Nice Job
2006-07-15 03:03:43 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
I don't know about you age, but it's
Fabulous
Great
Amazing
Superb
Beautiful
Sweet
Outstanding
Excellent
Terrific
Splendid
Fantastic
Marvelous
Brilliant
Hey, I'm running out of my vocabulary.
Really speaking, this is for the first time I'm reading such a nice piece of literature on the net! Keep It Up!
And I hope you don't mind if I keep the piece with my self?
2006-07-15 10:10:24 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
Its boring and nearly meaningless. The greatest poetry can be related to by all and paints a scene in ones head. I found it difficult to keep reading, as the scheme seemed random and the words were non-descriptive.
2006-07-15 10:04:25 · answer #3 · answered by reverenceofme 6 · 0⤊ 1⤋
Is a nice effort, but reminds me of prayer said before a meal.
2006-07-15 10:04:20 · answer #4 · answered by drewsilla01 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It's good. Anytime I tried writing poems I'd give up on the rhyming, so I respect you for what you did.
2006-07-15 10:02:51 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
In a dream to me god did reveal
that he himself is not really real
so do enjoy this world a lot
cause that my friends is all we've got
2006-07-15 10:04:00 · answer #6 · answered by bonzo the tap dancing chimp 7 · 0⤊ 1⤋
Great poem. God bless u and have a great weekend.
2006-07-15 10:09:50 · answer #7 · answered by jerryhmusic 3 · 1⤊ 0⤋
poem is cool but the way of presenting is tooooooooooooo bad
2006-07-15 10:02:56 · answer #8 · answered by miths 3 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Its really great.. i really appreciate literary pieces...
by the way good morning dear.
2006-07-15 10:01:59 · answer #9 · answered by ♠šCep†ΩЯque♠ 3 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Beautiful -if you wrote that you should get it published (certainly
copyrighted) and make those, you know, plaques or something!
2006-07-15 10:01:28 · answer #10 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋