I steped on a slimy slug in the dark last night. Yuck!
I steped on that slug in the dark, "yucky, yuck".
There was no light for the steps in this rented house.
I could not see it laying there. I can not put a light out here, it does not belong to me, this rented houseI see.
The flashlight I have sat in the car and used mainly to see the
biggest of animals that might be standing near my step.
Oh my!,What ever can I do? A bigger and brighter light maybe, and then, I could see the slug beneith my feet.
2006-07-14 03:07:03 · 5 answers · asked by writer05 2 in Education & Reference ➔ Other - Education
You can do anything you put your mind to
although, the piece above does need some work
2006-07-14 03:10:18 · answer #1 · answered by Roz 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Besides the spelling errors b-e-n-e-A-t-h, stepped has 2 "p's" and "housel", no I don't think it's good.
The sentences are long and run on and incomplete: The flashlight I have sat in the car and used mainly to see the biggest of animals that might be standing near my step.
Additionally it doesn't follow a logical, chronological sequence.
2006-07-14 03:11:24 · answer #2 · answered by csucdartgirl 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
LOL don't you just love it when you ask a question and someone Tell's you that you diden spell things right....To the lady who was worried about the spelling you missed the point the question was... Can I write a children's Book!!! NOT can i spell good. But to answer your question yes if that's what you want to do go for it.....
2006-07-14 03:44:19 · answer #3 · answered by dl200558 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
If you want to do something you will. just believe yourself
2006-07-14 03:41:25 · answer #4 · answered by Omid T 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
no
2006-07-14 03:10:08 · answer #5 · answered by mdpike1 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋