Handsome young man speaks to his love:
Open your eyes and let your love shine,
you are finer than wine, dearest of mine.
Come now, I must tell you as soon as we meet,
the wildest secrets of my lonely heartbeat.
Nothing is sweeter or deeper than love
when rapture is dancing within the soul,
we are young lovers at heaven's door,
never being in love before....
I see you face and it's a wonderful day
and I tell of my love with a floral boquet.
. . . . . . . . . . . . . .
Beautiful girl speaks to her Love:
Romance divine, tears and laughter combine,
as we let our pent-up emotions unwind.
Tell me the nice things you wish me to hear,
lonely heart secrets are dreawing me near!
Love makes me whole, makes me complete,
deep in my heart, fine memories I keep,
mystery plays its part for a lifetime or more,
a "joining together" at heaven's door.
Oh how I wish I could show you the way,
but I'll save this adventure for another day.
2006-07-13 05:08:29 · 7 answers · asked by Anonymous in Family & Relationships ➔ Singles & Dating
that's so sweet, did u write it? email me at luvmylpniko@yahoo.com i want more poems!!
2006-07-13 05:11:37 · answer #1 · answered by luvmylpniko 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
WOW i like it ,its old fashoin but very romantic heart melting words can not express. The poem speaks of many things and if this is your true feelings for some one wow lucky her.
2006-07-13 05:14:01 · answer #2 · answered by sht4brains4 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
That is beautiful!
Don't forget to spell check though. There are a few mistakes.
2006-07-13 05:16:50 · answer #3 · answered by Cheryl K 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Nice poetic try my frnd you have the gift ... keep on going
2006-07-13 05:13:56 · answer #4 · answered by Clark794 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
BEAUTIFUL!!!! ITS VERY EYE CATCHING. ITD NICE TO KNOW THAT A MAN LIKES POETRY. THATS VERY RARE THESE DAYS. I ADMIRE YOU.
2006-07-13 05:12:39 · answer #5 · answered by Jessica 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
it good i like it a lot and your gf is a luck one good luck
2006-07-13 05:12:20 · answer #6 · answered by maya 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
That's so cool! You're so talanted!
:)
2006-07-13 05:13:11 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋