this fo you girls and I hope you like it , what do you think?
women are like flowers, women are also are beauty in sight,they are so delicate,their soul is such a fire, shinier than any light.
women are like the water crystaline and pure,deep like an ocean something for us men to lure.
women were conceived in such a mysterious way,but it really does not matter,they give us their love every single day.
women eyes are the truth , women eyes are so deep,I would pay a steep price of passion to have them all indeed.
women need our love , but we need
their love more, they gave us live,this is a feat that it cannot be ignored.
women are here stay, to love us all men, please treat then with love, because theres no greater passion than them.
2006-07-12 03:16:50 · 14 answers · asked by Nando 3 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Performing Arts
I think that poem is an awsome poem i love poetry. you should get somewere with your poetry.^_^ I see that you appriciate women and thats a good quality to have in a man. most men would like girls who exploit themselves.
2006-07-12 16:32:52 · answer #1 · answered by dubblehugs 2 · 2⤊ 1⤋
it genuinely relies upon on the girl. My ex wasn't the "quaint" form and she or he did not extremely see too a lot in such issues as that. My fiancee now, notwithstanding; LOVES when I write her poems, short memories, songs, artwork, etc.... once you hit upon the right female she will be flattered with the help of your creativity once you've her on your ideas even as coming up issues. once you're with the right female she will encourage your creativity, and what extra valuable thanks to make your creativity thrive than to create issues for her? there is little in this international that makes my fiancee sense extra particular than when I take care of her to a romantic dinner, some plants and a nicely-written poem that i have written for her. on the turn part, no matter if the girl isn't too loopy about the poems... write them for her & shop them in a mag or a e book of a few form. On a particular occaison (anniversary, valentines...etc) provide the e book to her to exhibit her the way you sense. it will be quaint, notwithstanding it really is a sentiment from the midsection & that's continually beloved even as coming from a loved one.
2016-11-01 22:06:35 · answer #2 · answered by harib 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
"I think You must be somewhere between 15 and 18, if not, grow up. Your style is "Latin". If so try it in Spanish. Latin girls fall for this noncense.
2006-07-12 03:22:47 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Its really cute!! i would love to have my boyfriend write a poem and read it to me!
-Ally
2006-07-12 03:21:35 · answer #4 · answered by Ally 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
its nice, but not all women are what you say. not all men feel this way either. but its nice, not bad
2006-07-12 03:25:02 · answer #5 · answered by michelle 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
what a beautiful poem! you are an excellent writer you should do things like this more often than not. i love your poem and please write more.
2006-07-12 03:21:18 · answer #6 · answered by Ronii ^.^ 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Doesn't make much sense, I'm afraid.
2006-07-12 03:20:27 · answer #7 · answered by Davie 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
nice poem.keep them coming.sent it to poetry.com
2006-07-12 03:30:37 · answer #8 · answered by Vivian S 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
that's pretty good- you should enter it into a competition or something....
2006-07-12 03:22:11 · answer #9 · answered by soccer babe 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
wow!! that wasso sweet if some girl didn't think that they are crazy!!!!
2006-07-12 16:54:04 · answer #10 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋