Lost in a dream, her beauty glows,
Deep inside my body, only my soul knows,
I can not explain just i will feel,
If love is without romance it cannot be real,
So easy to say but sometimes its true,
If that day ever happens, love will be through,
A soft gentle touch, A sweet spoken word,
A time must begin to let love start its birth.
2006-07-11 22:21:11 · 5 answers · asked by lovely soul with insite 3 in Family & Relationships ➔ Singles & Dating
I like the feel of it, but the last line seemed out of rythm a little. But it was nice.
2006-07-11 22:26:04 · answer #1 · answered by lynda_Luv 2 · 3⤊ 0⤋
Very good got talent
2006-07-12 05:24:42 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
It's beautiful. I think it's really good
P.S. Well done if you wrote it yourself!
2006-07-12 05:23:56 · answer #3 · answered by @~>--T--<~@ 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Its really good , if you have written your self , keep it up good writting .
2006-07-12 05:26:44 · answer #4 · answered by your noon 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
really good, I like it :)
2006-07-12 05:26:25 · answer #5 · answered by UniqueIsWhoSheIs 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋